Over all I enjoyed this, but I found it very repetitive which led me to skimming over a lot of the content. I don’t think it’s necessary for us to see both POV in so much detail, I don’t want to have to re-read the dialogue from the previous chapter. There were also a lot of inconsistencies with the medical side of things, like how quickly Edward recovered was just not feasible... The overall story was great and I loved what you did with the characters, I just think it needs some work to really polish it up!

SO okay I'm going to tell you why I'm leaving this fic. NO one in the US can be a doctor by the age of 24, it's simple math. equals resident { for any specialized field}. Google has those answers.

I just stumbled across this story yesterday and couldn't stop reading! Thanks for sharing this!

That was perhaps one of the best introduction to Charlie chapters I’ve ever read and I’ve read a shit-ton. ;-)

you are truly a spectacular writer..hope to hear more in the future from you..I have never laughed so much in all my years as I have with this story..what a gift you have been granted..

I’m sorry but I’ve got to say this... these text conversations are very annoying when you’re using the shorten version of the word. So honestly instead of enjoying your story i am now skimming it and I’m debating flouncing because of that, which would suck since I’m more or else half way there.. but these characters are supposed to be grown adults and with impressive careers for their very young age, so maybe I’m expecting to much, regardless if this is fiction

Much like Emmett I had taken a huge full of my cherry slushy and promptly spit it out as I started laughing so hard when Rose is asking Jasper if he is the one who was kissing her "Pee-Wee" & the twig & berries analogy made me laugh even harder as that is what my brother calls it.

Absolutely great story

In two short chapters you've made characters I can love to hate. The trespassing and punching children, the complete lack of remorse for PUNCHING CHILDREN, the shitty 90's teen lingo that makes them (and you by proxy) sound like an old fart trying to be young again, and also makes a simple sentence become a fucking paragraph, the terrible taste in fashion designers, and the dumbass nurses who would rather ogle firefighters then save people's lives in a probably terribly understaffed hospital. If it was your intention to make me hope for poverty and death for your characters, then bravo. If not, then I can only hope that time has improved your writing and your opinion of what's 'cool'.

This writer's messages and this story in general is so funny I'm dying

Esme is mom goals. I love her

The sexiest shoulders I've ever seen hahahaha lmao

Absolutely love Edwards point of view...and Dicks! Lol

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This story is absolutely hillariously adorable! I loved every second of it. And don't even get me started on Dick...on second thought, I'd love to get started on Dick! Lol! Thank you for sharing these awesome characters! You have a gift, and I am so glad I found your story!

I love this story and Dick is just hilarious!