Reviews for Lana
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 11/4/2019
Great story!
ccoelhob chapter 1 . 6/5/2019
Absolutely love the Lois and Clark dynamic! You never disappoint!
framework4 chapter 1 . 7/30/2018
Cute
Ravyn chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Having read through a ridiculous amount of Smallville fic, it was really nice to see the Lana/Clark connection through another universe. This was such a sweet piece, especially in the places where you could just see the relationship between them. I love this bit because it’s uncomplicated and wonderful and Clark’s utter assurance that they would be together, regardless is fabulous. And I love the fact that you have them in such an open, loving relationship that this kind of discussion is possible.
MegasaurusRex101 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Okay . . . So I avoided this one based on principle alone . . . and then I says to myself, "Self, she hasn't let you down before right?" and so I respond to myself and say, "You know what, self? You're right." So myself responds, "Of course I'm right,now go read this." So myself responds, "I think I will"

And I am so very very glad that I listened . . . and argued to read this because it was fantastic. And I love Lois' arguments and crazy reasoning . . . another hilarious fic.
megamom2 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
This was completely charming from start to finish!
t wrecks chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Awe wonderful
Fay chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Such a great story, so sweet and well written. I love that he has faith that they would have met and fallen in love no matter what. Because it's true the whole of the Supman Universe shows that time and again.

[quote]He closed his eyes in a blink, “Just like that. Face it, Lane. Me and you? In this life, in another life, in any life.” He fixed her with a look that made the nape of her neck tingle, “It’s meant to be.”[quote]

That just sums it up really

[quote]“So, I guess what you’re really saying is that I best Lana in all ways, in all areas?” [quote]

lol you've just got to love Lois.

Brilliant story
RouthFan chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Oh my, this story is just perfect.

The reflection on the life that could have been, and how Lois and Clark are really the life that is meant to be. Just beautifully written in a "trademark" style of yours, it gets the pitch of sincerity and witty banter that we all love between Lois and Clark just right. As always.

You do drama so well my dear, yet fluff is so your stuff!
SassyReaderGirl chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Love it!
Alphie chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Sigh... you astound me. You really do. I just need to throw in the towel and never write again. Why are your published?

“I’m not sure what part of our domestic life could possibly be improved upon by either one of us making jams.”

You are too funny! I always find myself snorting and giggling through your fics even when you aren't setting it up to be funny. It's the tongue in cheek way you write I think.

And then you go and knock me down with the romance... and the touch of Jason... and everything that I love about SR fan fiction. This was just beautiful.
NiteAngel chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Here am I, out here, doing... whatever,

you mean... 'here i am'...?

“That’s what your counting on?

it's 'you're' not 'your'

hah! love this line: '“This hay isn’t going to bale itself, sugarbean...'

“The hypothetical her can kiss my hypothetical me’s hypothetical ass.” - lol

i love the script. Great banter b/w lois and clark. very like a married couple, i think. D

NiteAngel

mistressbabette51 chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
Only Lana or maybe her father, could bring out Lois' insecurities, and how she really feels about her relationship. Excellent scenes with her and Clark. You are soo good with these two. I truly admire your work!

Thanks!
metaphor chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I admit that due to Smallville and some comic arcs, I had a decidedly negative reaction to the title of this story. But since it was written by you, I forged on. What an unexpectedly sweet piece. Clark's reassurances to Lois were spot-on and perfectly stated, and I loved the banter between them. You really understand these characters and write them beautifully. This was truly a joy to read. Thank you.
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