what a nice ending! Good story

Interesting interpretation of the storyline. I enjoyed reading it!

As much as I love this fic I hate how u spent 8 chapters bashing sakura only to flip the switch in this chapter. I'm a sakura hater and know it but this bipolar writing kinda gives me a headache no real complaints other then that.

Think you could write more like this?

ok so I was a bit put off with natsu's childlike actions. I know you made her that way to make her more fragile but it's still weird. Sakura is really dense and bitchy but okay you make her turn better in the end-all which is always done. and the last one, I was really disturbed by the fact that kakashi as 1 23 year old can have sex with a 13 year old KID. but I tried to look at feudal japan's perspectives and well I can barely accept them but this is fanfic so whatever. overall I like the romance minus those part I mention above and keep trying to improve your writing! cheering for you.

Finally! Age acknowledgement! I'm still not cool with children being breeding machines/pinkhaired harlots/married but I can't be in denial forever...

Side note: in this reader's humble opinion, the long winded dialogue rehashes are unnecessary, dull, and contain toooo many details. Not to mention, Kakashi isn't exactly someone who'd give people step by steps.

That sounds rough, but I really don't know how else to phrase it.

In my mind, this an alternate world where the academy graduation age is sixteen and I'm going to keep pretending until the story acknowledges that twelve year olds should not be in a relationship with grown men.

Personal squick/denial aside, I love it.

I love how Sakura's mom isn't a real bitch about Naruto. It is refreshing to see her being civil in a fanfiction instead of a banshee.

Anbu are forbidden to speak of their occupations.
Namikaze Natsu Sukai is an impossible situation because the Japanese merge kanji together to make names. You should have gone for Natsuko, meaning summer child or even just Natsu.
Sakura goes from bitter harlot to sort of nice to jealous witch within the span of two sentences in the middle of this story, all to Natsu.
Yoosei girl is stupid. Just Yoosei would have been fine.
Natsu is so damn childish. Like not even 13 year old childish, which you already established. She's 5 year old childish.
Sasuke cares for no one at this stage. He literally is a flight risk, as you had also established earlier in the story, so why should he care about anyone else? His behaviour should emit nothing about caring for his fellow genin because that is what experienced Anbu would have told the Hokage. Therefore his behaviour should be his dark, avenger, betrayed bro-con self. I don't say that he should have been completely antagonizing, like all wannabe emo, and absolute sadness and the world should revolve around me type of thing, but him being nice is not the path he was written to be in.
Check your facts, research more than the bare surface of the Japanese culture( because unlike what some other stupid authors think, that I completely assure you is NOT you, 'oh Naruto lmao Imma make an entire AU that's not mentioned in the summary and make Naruto Western and make the characters look different and make them an alien and basically write my own goddamn story that only steals the names and not announce it as a fricking original story with my own characters instead nooooo no no no Imma put in the Naruto archive'), and maybe get a beta reader to proofread.
Thanks

Sukai is the Yondaime's last name?! Are you joking with me? NO!

Also there are different religions in Japan but the mainstream one for Naruto is the Shinto religion.

I feel as though someone on the counsel would have put up a fuss if they knew that kakashi only planned to have one kid, because seriously he's the last one of his clan too and if you think about it, a Jounin of Kakashi's caliber is hard to come by so why wouldn't they push for him to have more kids?

This is an amazing story. I'm just going to pretend that Danzo of ROOT as found out and killed when Orochimaru left *nods* Kakashi is just...aww with Natsu-hime.
Kiba needs more than an ass kicking tho, I'd have locked him up personally, he crossed too much of a line to the point it physically changed him permanently, he could always revert again...

Come on, someone please make sakura grow up

Nice

That was just awesome :D I loved to see how mature they grew!