:D yay stevie stevie

oh ted... *sobs*chrissy...oh god no

i forget its JoMo and not cena..meh..christ poor randy..poor all of them

n...
evan...no...
...EVAN!

I adore this ending so much that words can't even express it!

Ahhh! So kawaii! I fucking loved this entire story! You really know how to make a girl happy. XD Greatest story evaaahh!

Pain and agony! Yay! LMFAO, I'm half-way through it,and all I have to say is that this right here, is the BEST dark fic ever. I plan on finishing this by tomorrow, maybe the day after. I am truely in love with this story, epic awesome! I'm really putting myself in Addy's POV and the images are kinda scary. XD Love it!

NOOO! The awesomeness I was getting from you can't end now..I don't know, its up to 30 chapters but I was still hoping it would run at least for some time more. Well duh, all good things have come to an end but it definitely saddens me :(

Jeff is as out of touch with his senses as before. Am I terrified for Adam's safety? Big time.

Fuck, and he starts his escape celebrations with another murder, and a fun murder nevertheless. I honestly don't know what fate awaits for Adam cause right now it doesn't look really good.

Yeah, that's what I have been saying. I am glad Judy realizes that she has to do something about Adam's mental well-being. But really, Adam's condition is heart-breaking. He is as out of touch with his senses at the moment as much is Jeff. All his emotions have been subsided. Jeff is over-shadowing everything.

Well, Jay's reaction was totally expected. He is dumbfounded by Adam's mental state and who could blame him? Plus how much painful it must have been for him to hear those thing out of Adam :(

Ok, that was really fucked up. Adam has gone too far. His mind is totally manipulated. He was fragile throughout the whole thing and I am not surprised to see him getting damaged mentally this severely.

Ah, I wish Jay would have been able to talk some sense into Adam if his own condition would have allowed it. I am honestly greatly concerned for Adam :(

FUCK! Jeff is so fucking sadistic and Adam have no clue. He is that out of it! That last scene was sickeningly sweet in its own way. At one point I love Jeff showering Adam with attention but killing poor Judy and than fooling Addy, too demented.

Adam is totally depending on Jeff no matter what reality holds. Its not even funny. Hehe, although I like the idea of Jeff taking Adam away and taking care of him.

Till death, do us a part..this ended so abruptly but yet beautifully. It still leaves me with so many questions. As where is Jeff gonna take Adam? How'll he treat him? Will Adam ever get better?...Damn...you are cruel for being so good and so teasing.

Awesome job on this epic fic of yours! Although it was the only Dom Jeff piece I was getting from you so it definitely leaves me with a heavy feeling. I wanna read more Jedam like this when Jeff could top! Maybe a sequel? Or a sequel to 'Want, Take, Have' or better than anything, a new one?

LOL yeah, I am day dreaming. You have too much going on at the moment. I'll keep re-reading this awesomeness from you till I get something new and charming!

Thank you and congrats on doing this brilliant job!

Damn. Downer ending. But it was really good, start to finish. Sick as shit and unrepentant about it. I loved it.

if only he knew what that meant

idky but that last line still makes me think that Jeffy will sanp again one day and kill adam...or ... yeah nvm jeff is somehow so crazy he could actually be in love like this lol. I feel kind of bad for adam, like he's so crazy and in denial, he could start killing ppl too.

Love how randy was sleeping XD

great story (in the serial psycho killer kind of way) D

Love Nati

LOVE IT!

YAY Jeffy got his Addy back!

I really liked this story are you planning on doing a part 2? We need to know what become of the rest of them. Like Connor,Copper,James,& Mark. You can't just leave it at that! And what about Jeff he may have Addy back but will happens to them now?

Oh and Happy Thanksgiving Day.

I'm glad Adam and Jeff managed to get back together again.

I really enjoyed this story of yours so dark but so compelling thanks for a great job