A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

One of the great stories that don't get updated...

nice really nice

this is really good i hope you continue it just please seperate the lines again chapter 6 hurt my eyes

wrong, you got the wrong explanation, Naruto is just a plain hollow, a gillian is a big black towering shape with a pointy nose that looks exactly like every single other gillian and is the weakest level of the menos grande classification, adjuchas are the second level of menos grande, with the vasto lorde being the strongest class of menos grande

dont do this again put spaces

I hope Sakura dies, and that Naruto evolved.

Damn. I really liked this story. Too bad it is DEAD!

On a lighter note, invade you somehow have a change of heart, I shall comment a bit. Now, how about some ideas.

I think NaruSaku is just fine, and maybe Sasuke can find a special someone too? More related to fighting, I think Sasuke should have a fight with baldy, where he relaeses his zanpaktou, although I think "baldy" should win anyways, but only just as he has the use of Bankai where as Sasuke dosen't.

With Naruto, I think he should grow alot stronger. If he were to turn into a proper adjuchas then he would be able to match up with his new "bat friend", and a more powerful Naruto is an awesome Naruto, and eventually, Naruto should definitely become a vasto lorde. I don't think that any peoples from the soul society should go to where Naruto comes a second time, (if he does) because that would mean that Naruto would either get beat up and escape with his... Err... being, or kill the shinigami. I don't think that giving character deaths out ao easily is a good thing. But then again, if Naruto consumes the shinigami who cone after him he can become alot stronger. But, this is all for you to decide. Personaly, awesomely powerful Naruto is a great Naruto.

THE COMMUNITY HAS SPOKEN!

U-P-D-A-T-E!

interesting

awesome chap. made me cry a little... .

Matsumoto X Sasuke XD lol

its a really good story and i wonder if they would meet ichigo when he goes to hueco mundo. i also wonder if naruto would meet aizen and join him that would be awesome. i wonder wat rank he would have with the espada.

it was easier to read w/ the spaces...the format b4 chp.6...anyway... good story! i cant beleive Naruto let Madara go ...bet u that's gonna come back and bite him in the ass later looking forward to ur next update!

I continue to really like your story so far. Please update again really soon.

Think that you could make this a Naruto/Harem fic? The would likely be composed of: Sakura, Hinata, Ino, Nemu, Yoruichi, Rangiku, Nel, and Harribel. Sasuke's girl would likely be Soifon or Momo or both.