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I have read this so many times because its one of my favorite oneshots but i just realized that I never left a review so here is one now. I loved all the different point of views so that we could understand everybody's perspective of things and you write Jasper's character just the way I see him. Brilliant job!

Awwwww i love a skittish jasper.*:.｡. o()o .｡.:*
Good work

i loved it, maybe do another chapter or an outtake x

awe... poor jazzy. i never really thought bout how things would hav been to become apart of a big family after living with maria. tht was really awesum insight. i love it. :)

Amazing! That story fit in very well and it seemed that the events could have actually happened. I liked Emmett's character very much, altough Jasper and Alice are still my favourite. you write all the Cullens very realistictly. good job!

really good! short but sweet, yet kinda angsty hence the genre! really amazing! and like i said i probably would buy ur book and read it!

It's Emmett's fault

that was really good, because that sounds like something jasper would do. where's alice when ay need her? out shopping...stupid alice. what does skiddish mean?

This is really just the best story ever! I really wish you would write more like this! :D I love jasper fanfics like this!

This story was amazingly fantastic I love angst-y stuff like this! :D

Awesome it was really good

I enjoyed this chapter a lot! I can't explain why...but to me it's awesome. Great job and keep up the good work!

~Eclipse-Vamp :)

Please keep going I love Alice/jasper stories!

I loved this story - you are fast becoming my favorite author :-)