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damnit. i hoped to read more. the story is great and very interesting.

why you have to make him hate the old man messed up the story for me and going to stop reading the rest

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.

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1) Why did you add "Uzumaki" to the bridge name, that just makes the name a mouthful... the "Great Naruto Bridge" rolls off the tongue better.
2) I'm 99.9% certain that Deidara is confirmed as male.

Evil sunset

Naruto is taking all the fights and winning?! Not right! You are taking away all of Kakashi's fights!

that was good keep the chapters coming

this is a good story but why did you go with naruto was raped and is not suffering at all from the event and why hasn't anko suffered for it. basically naruto forceably lost his verginity in what was likely in a violent manner wile still verry youg like i am guessin 10, which is a tramatising event ie effects a persons mind in a very bad way especially when they are children, and he seems to be fine heck he doesn't even seem to be sexophobic or overly embracive of it or any sign that he went through such an event at all. basically you have a point less event mentioned especially considering nothing happened to anko over the matter. this brings me to my next rant. you do realise that if a grown person were to molest or even rape a child, their lives are as good a forfeit because both criminals and law abiding citizens will be out to kill them, even considering that the citizens don't consider naruto human, sademe kakashi and tenzo would have killed anko for doing that to naruto.

this is a good story but I really fucking HATE that you make the Kyuubi just appear out of nowhere rather than sticking to canon and having had it been sealed inside Kushina.

you do know Wave was only an A rank mission right?

only slightly above average ninjutsu? wtf are you smoking crack or something? there's no way Naruto can only have slightly above average ninjutsu the kid is literally a walking talking fucking chakra battery. Hell even without the Kyubi he'd still have more chakra than the other kids in the series due to being an uzumaki.

Is orichi just sitting in his chair just like pouting? Cuz, I wanna see a pic of him pouting.

Finish it