What an emotional roller coaster of a story. Great work!

Simply great!

Aww

I Like it

Hi Beth,

I have just finished reading your story, i absolutly adored it! Its actually the second time i have read it and both times it has managed to give me chills and the ability to really picture what you were describing. Your style of writing is wonderful, the pace that the chapters took worked extremly well and i think you captured Brooke and Lucas in a relaistic way. This story is one of my favourites here on FF.

Would you consider writing a sequel to this story? I would willingly offer my services as a beta. However i doubt you need the help.

I hope all is well :)

Natalie

This story was fantastic and I loved it. You are a very talented writer and I hope you coninute to write One Tree Hill fanfictons when you get some free time. I understand what it is like to go to school and take care to a toddler and infant. It is not always easy and there is never enought time but it is awarding. Any way if you start writing again when you get some free time I look forward to reading your new stories.

Tanya

I like it

aww, this was really good. I just spent the last couple of days reading it.

I missed Naley but this was perfect for BL and BL need a little more love than everyone else since we were so shafted on the show.

- Corey

i lund it! deffo shud do a sequel :). they cud b married & hav grace & 2 sons (2 boys & a girl :)!) :) awesom. it was a great story

-Ash

Thank you so much for this story Brucas has always been my favorite couple and this is how I wanted them to end ...Happily married with a baby and finally Brooke going after Lucas and fighting for him.

ok I think the finale was AMAZING

I loved so much that Brooke stoods up for her love and for her child... I loved that they were honest for once and that they got their happy ending

great job... I liked so much this fic

hope you write something new

wah i love it i hope you gone continu please

great job..never thought brooke would be the one to go after lucas, but great nonetheless..

OMG! You've gotten all the way to the end, and how wonderful it has been reading it from the begining.

I thought it was a great idea to write brooke standing up for her relationship its what I always love to read for Brucas.

I cant believe ist finally overbut Im very interested in reading then ext of you work.

-Mel

Perfect ending to the story. Im glad you switched it up a bit! Thank you. Loved it!