I really love how you did the characters in this, cannot wait for the update!

I just adore this first chapter! "the doorwing twitched again before settling into his grip" that sentence and the one just before... ooh! just gives me the squeels!:D I can practically feel an answering tickle, it's so... i don't know. Secretive? something.

Yay! I love this, keep this up!

damn this is awesome! And so purely FUN to read!

A very good story, I would love to see an update for this!

More please! Too Cute and funny to not continue! X3

Huh. Never thought Jazz would be one for somnophilia. But I really love this!

No you evil, need smexy stuff.

*Pokes author hard in the side* I know you have something else written! My muse can sense it and we don't like being put off on our Prowler/Jazzy! Update or face the rath of the Owl! *Laughs evilly and pokes the author again*

ASDKJL;JFD Such a tease! And I don't know if I should hope this story to continue. A personal favourite of mine watching Jazz trying to use his charm and wit to flirt with an oblivious and flighty Prowl.

Could you please finish this little story? I would love to see how things wont get back to normal despite Smokeys words... :-)

erk, no don't stop there. Bad, muse, bad, your audience wants more, please.

Hope to read more soon even if it has been awhile. This is starting to interest me. Keep up the good work!

poke... poke... poke... is it dead? I hope not. This is really very cute and I feel Prowl's pain.

You are evil...:/. Update ASAP

DANG PROWL! Love the scene with the map, lol.

That energon goodie thing was awesome! XD