Pls make more this is great!

If someone has already not asked could I be your beta? Also is that a vote? If it is then I vote for NaruHina.

You know, that weights thing is VERY popular in fanfictions but I see a GLARING error with it, if you NEVER took off the weights you'd become accustomed to moving/fighting/whatever with the weights ON, so if you took them off, yes you might be faster/or stronger but you'd ALSO be TOTALLY UNBALANCED and COMPLETELY unprepared to fight without them on. So as a matter of FACT their more of a liability then an asset, I have NO IDEA where anime got the idea it was a good training method.

Plus why would team 8 (a search team and reconnaissance team) keep sparing with team 7? (a full blown JUST COMBAT team) considering that, that's NOT what team 8 is BUILT FOR. Kakkashi's team should be sparring with Gai's team IF ANYONE. (combat vs. combat) It makes no sense other then for an author just to keep throwing sasuke and naruto together. (which those two should never be ANYWHERE around each other.. they go in COMPLETELY different circles... They have COMPLETELY different motives, COMPLETELY different GOALS, COMPLETELY different friends, they ACTUALLY have NOTHING in common whatsoever. Even their bloodlines are COMPLETELY opposite from one another)

OH good, fish-face is dead in this one, never liked that character. Also why is naruto 13 and still in an orphanage? Especially if he's training to be a ninja, aren't those two things KINDA INCOMPATIBLE?

Also the dead-bone pulse would MAKE MINCE-MEAT outta kiba and akumaru! Think about it... Getsuna... SHREDDED HANDS... Akumaru with a BLOODY MOUTH and busted teeth... and sasuke FASTER the hinata? HAHAHA.. What are you smoking? That's not going to happen at least till kakkashi steals Lee's training. "Naruto has a good offense".. When did he EVER go on the offense? For "the last member of a KILL CRAZED clan" he went to STALEMATE awful fast! Also when does the hokage PLAN on telling naruto.. when he's chunnin? JOUNNIN? He'll know AUTOMATICALLY when he hits KAGE!

Also this whole "chakra control" thing is getting VERY OLD... Kushina NEVER had chakra control even as a JOUNNIN, NO UZUMAKI DOES! It CANNOT BE CONTROLLED. It's denser then other people's chakra (it's why it can form chains that can LOCK UP A BIJUU).

This is a shitty Sharingan.

NARUTO/HINATA! XD Soo cute what a couple! -cue fangirly"ness- :) )
Good story so far! Oooooo or a harem were all the girls like him but he only likes Hinata that would be comical lol, poor Naruto if that happens lol :P.

Asuma's team number is 10

I have really enjoyed your story so far and I was surprised you didn't take the easy way out to make Naruto super strong super fast which I really enjoyed. The style you did Naruto's personality is great so far and I am really digging how he does his battles and how he reacts to everyone around him. Also I was really happy to see him not in Team 7 cause I never understood why he was put into a team of people who either hated him or as in Inu's place not teach him anything even though he knew he had the 9 tails in him. Also great work on how you did Jiraya cause damn is it nice to see him actually acting like a sensi instead of ignoring everything, I really couldn't believe how crappy he trained Naruto in canon. I still can't wait to see how you end up doing things since so far you have did them so differently then what everyone else does, Also I hope you don't do the Invasion and just have the exams happened cause it would be awesome just to see that instead of the snake screwing it all up. Also I bet I aint the only one who looks forward to seeing Naruto meet his fellow and last clan member to see what happens, I am hoping them meeting changes them both and they both find some source of family from one of another cause they both need it if you ask me. Well thank you for posting your story so people can read it and I look forward to your future works.

I'm surprised there hasn't been a Kenjutsu wielder to help with Naruto's training since he apparently doesn't have any Kaguya scrolls for their taijutsu dances.

this is really great please keep it up because I really like this story and am eager to know what is going to happen next.

Really good story so far and you're right about Oto not getting a lot of scrren time since after the Sasuke Retrieval they vanish except for fillers. On the subjects of Kaguyas is Kimmimaro still going to be in it and is he going to meet Naruto? YUgito-wise she could be on a team that is doind a diplomtic mission to Konoha and be an ambassador for Kumo to Konoha for either another peace treaty or an alliance.

PM me back on what you think of the idea if you like it or not.

Awesome story, like how you've made the sharingan not the 'ultimate fighting weapon'

I mean seriously even someone with no skill what so ever could use the Mangekyo to kill a high level shinobi, either with Tsukyomi or Ameratsu (I have no idea how to spell either of them and too lazy to google.)

hey awesome story so far. just wondering though, is this ever going to be continued? its the best dead bone pulse Naruto fic i have read and it would be a shame to leave it hanging where it is right now

Awesome job !

Please hurry up with next chapter.

sweet a kaguya naruto havent read something like this before very interesting