Awesome!

Chapter 2 was very well written - a good back ground on Beth Turner. So she does remember Mick St. John from that time as a 4 year old child.

Great writing - great storyline - you have their voices.

Very good writing on this - good explanations for Mick St. John's behavior, his deep need to protect and watchover Beth Turner.

A good storyline - you write well. Some of the stories you have written are not quite my cup of tea - but this you get both of my thumbs up.

Gah! I have been looking EVERYWHERE on this site for a "little Beth" story! Thank you for writing one! This looks lovely. .

That was nice, dear Susie.

You did a good job on the retelling of this story, showing the thoughts that the ep didn't have time to show. It was there unspoken though, because of the good acting. You put the thoughts and the action together like only a novelist can do. I hope others find your story and enjoy it as much as I did. Are you going to go on with it, or is this the conclusion?

That last line was especially good.

I don't think Mick wanted to celebrate, but to stop dwelling on how sad the situation was by doing something cheerful. Good work, again!

Your insight is good. Your writing style is really coming along. I encourage you to continue this series. Good ML stories don't write themselves.

You couldn't slow up by explaining how the bullets were 'out', I know. This was very fast paced, but I do wonder who took the bullets out and why he waited to drink that blood. I like being in Mick's mind like this. Keep it up.

Hi SB. I just discovered this today and am reading back chapters. It's interesting how you are in Morgan's devious mind as she plots and plans her revenge and getting Mick back. Of course Cynthia must have helped. Thanks for the behind the scenes story. I like those! VR/Penina

This is an enjoyable series. It's interesting to read the scenes from the different characters' POVs.

Hm, intriguing thought process. Bien.