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Dontchawishyouknewme334 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011 but she was - and then she was - but - HUH? I THOUGHT SHE WAS DEAD! who was the dude coming twords her at the end? Jake isnt dead! WAIT- is she in... well... you get it cuz when youre there its like you dont exist bt you do... but... MAN I THINK CONFUSING THINGS!sigh. oh well. -Dontchawishyouknewme334 |
Lynnburger14guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2010 Never say bad things about your writing IN your writing. The story was interesting. It kept my attention until the end. |
Curlscat chapter 1 . 12/3/2009 How is this 'something' going to kill her if she's already dead? Explain that to me? |
sinkingsouth chapter 1 . 8/27/2009 That was really good! It's going on my faves. :D -Rainbow |
Lola Sveroski chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Wow. That was really, really deep. A little bit gory, but other than that, very good. |
dylanja101 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009 woah! That was good. But dark... kind of gory like the ribs it really creeped me out. Are you gonna right another chapter? |
Jesse1993 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009 That was very imaginative and you got a completely different perspective on it, than other people see. I really liked it, you should write more. |
Lara D chapter 1 . 8/17/2009 Um how do I put this...it's getting boring,and this is the first chapter!well make it better,DONT ERASE THIS!make it better and I might read it. |
deleteaccount8497 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009 What... Briar's going to Hell? Anyways, I really really realy realy love thiss so so muucch! |
HolaIt'sEmily chapter 1 . 8/17/2009 Wow. That was dark, but very well written. Great job. |