nooo!i want to know what happens next!what's bakura gonna do? please update or at least so kind of sequel, please *puppy dog eyes*

I think that the story is really goond so far. And I would like to know whe nthe next chappter is coming up becasue I eant to know if bakura and ryou will syart to like each other at all plz update the story soon

Wow! This story is really good! I hope you don't give up on it!

So Bakura is part of some Japanese Mafia then, eh? That's interesting.

I wonder if Malik or Atemu (Yami) will become involved or if you just won't include them in the story.

Poor Ryou, doubting his friends will come save him. :(

Wow, you are good! I was fully focused on the story and you made everyday necessities interesting to read. Great work! I'm going to more of this. :)

I love Ryou by the way. . . He's my favorite!

YAY~ They're finally at least in the same place talking! That's just one step though.

Nice chapter! It was cute!

Oh man I love Ryou in this story - how he keeps berating himself for being so pitiful but yet can't help it. “Please hold me captive, I can’t even stand upright.” and "I could feel my own bottom lip quiver in fear. I am impossibly pathetic." *giggles* Yes, yes you are, Ryou. That's why we love you. XD

Dear God. Bakura's INSANE. Well, we knew that already, but he's off the hook in this story XD I love how he tells Ryou his name without thinking. Their whole dialogue in this chapter is really awesome D

OMG Bakura's in the Yakuza...that's awesome! Write more soon please!

This is really good so far! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

I really like insane Bakura!

Good Job!

I'm glad their interacting, can't wait for the next chapter~!

The switching between pov's got a bit confusing, but other then that great job. This is getting really interesting and is way better then when you first started.

me too tired to read next chapter right now. i like the story so far. the paragraphs are descriptive but also long. i gots homework i might not do and sleep waiting for me. i will read tomorrow at some point after school. goodnight! i like the story! :~)

Yami Soli: I'll gladly kill you~!

Me: She's kidding, that was some twist at the end.

Yami Soli: I SO can't wait to see what happens! How will Ryou react? What will Bakura do to him? The suspence is killing me!

Me: Aren't you energetic today.

Yami Soli: Yupperz!

Yes! A new chapter!

I like the way you write in first person! You should keep it that way if it applies to the story!

Your school offers Japanese? Lucky! I have to stick to taking German at my school, and learn Japanese badly on my own time. T.T

Can't wait for the next update!

I like reading in Bakura's pov, but I'm biased. Reading in Bakura's pov is the most interesting, I prefer being in his mind, not exactly because Ryou is bland, just because he's not doing anything as exiting in comparison.

Glad to see your back. And back with such amazing quality, hope to keep seeing you!

Bakura, that litle thief. XD I like it alternating between Ryou and Bakura's pov. So, i don't mind if the next chapter is like that. And speaking of the next chapter... You're going to update soon, right? Please.

Oh! I was so excited when I saw the update! I love it! This is my favorite chapter yet D Joey was so funny...and I love the scene where Bakura's breaking in and robbing the cash registers. It was really suspenseful and well-written! I love how you have the two meet - I had no idea how that was gonna happen, lol. YAY! Can't wait for the next chapter!