Please write this

I read the Kingdom hearts one lol but this ones fiuner...

... Lol in the beginning you said this would help out anyone who was wondering who Sephiroth was with... You only mentioned his name once in the entire story at the end ! XDDDDD

HE SCREWING MY BROTHER!
Haha! Classy I loved this so much! Big fan of Sephy and Cloud!

That was well written, funny, and hot. I enjoyed it!

lol... awesomely hot!

OMG amazing smex. I read this after reading the RiSo one, which was also amazing btw! i just love hot, bondage and toy ones :) :). but im not going to lie... that little comment made by sephy at the end... well, i envisioned a sephy/cloud/sora threesome in which the first two are 'training him to be less annoying' omg... is that wrong? :o especially 'cuz in ur 'verse cloud and sora are... brothers... still it would be sooo hot! again, great smut! XD 3

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wow. totally thought that was roxas getting banged..but nope :D hes with axel. in a third room x

like Seph-kun would be screwing anyoen else? At least in this fandom

haha that was cute and hot! i liked this alot

So hot!

I've read both the stories, they were amazing!

Awesome job, Poor Sora :( he'll never be the same Haahaa

luv it!poor Sora hearin Sephiroth doin his brother o_Olmao

{roflao} Poor Sora. ... NOT! XD Great job! Now... what was it I said in my review of the first part of this? OH YEAH! That was totally steamy and juicy and hawt and sexy and-!{head explodes AGAIN from the sheer EPICNESS of THIS oneshot}

That was deliciously hot and very sexy. Sephi is totally his awesome self and Cloud makes one lovely kitten and puppy in one.

ha ha, you should make another sequel, AkuRoku, call it 'What happens at home'

give it bondage and the works. ;D

That would be awesome...

of course this is coming from a perverted fangirl so -shrug-, good job on this and the one previous!

-dEmOn-