I love this, great job!

good one ha ha ha lol

Amazing

I really enjoyed the story I see some spelling errors but they don't pop up enough to warrant concern. I think that you should write a new story that includes the return of the didact and his promethean army. I honestly think that that would be most interesting, to see samus, master chief, wallace, dark samus, and the arbiter, fighting against the elite covenant remnant, the prometheans, and the didact.

Using red team from halo wars nice work

I really enjoyed reading this. I love to find stories where Samus and Master Chief do become more than friends. It was in depth and imaginative. I was greatly impresses, bravo.

Good story.

Man just I love your story.

Good job.

Ahhh! I enjoyed every minute of this story. From keeping them in character, to watching as how the relationship build up. It was really fun and entertaining to read. Thank you for such a great story! ]

I've been searching high and low for a good Master Chief x Samus story. I'm glad I found yours.

I like the story, but don't like how you portrayed samus as much weaker than she actually is, and btw, she would totally destroy anything the covenant could throw at her, her weapons and suit tech are way better than anything in the halo universe, a spartan laser might take out twenty percent of one energy tank.

adorable, totally in character and just...really really cute!

I really enjoyed reading this

I forgot to put this into the other one sorry for inconvenience, but anyway one more mistake was that Cortana has been with the chief for a long while past 7 years which is standard for rampancy to occur so why would she go crazy now? In my opinion because of being in forerunner computers she now may run without rampancy for hundreds to thousands of years. I just wanted to inform might be a good idea to change it if it doesn't screw with the entire story

well... i have rather mixed feelings about this fic... the halo part of the fic is really good and master chief stays in-character but i don't get why you had samus suck. really, compared to the game you un-badass-ed her sooooo much! i mean she failed against chief she did nothing on the planet exept warn chief and she got pwned by ridley without a second thought so chief could save her! i mean why didnt she at least defeat ridley to redeem her but not even that... thats really what gripes me here apart from that it's really well written.