Oh the heartbrake

Is it weird that Pruhan is my one true OTP so reading this breaks my heart but I love the way you wrote that I must continue. I can only imagine the pain and picturing what he did during this whole time of the marriage and honeymoon. How many times he had to rewrite the letter and empty bottles liter the ground with broken furniture surround the place. Coming to acceptance and finally resolve to buy a gift for her. Oh my heart aches

This story is just great.

I read your story and it was so beautiful!
Of course I started reading this because of pruhun and I had to admit it was kinda hard to read because of her growing love for Roderick.
And i guessed that she would end up together with Roderick again, but I couldn't help but to think what sadness Gilbert (omg poor Gilbert!) must have felt all those long years without even any more letters to Elizabeth (Elizaveth?)
And i couldn't help but to feel bad for Elizabeth because even though she chose Roderick and loved him too I couldn't help, but to think her love for Gilbert was stronger and as she said part of him remained in her and occasionally the emotions of pain of losing Gilbert seemed to overwhelm her...

Ah as I said very beautifully written,but the ending was sad for both of Gilbert and Elizaveth even though Elizabeth had Roderick who she learned to love Gilbert was alone TvT

In some way though I can kinda understood Elizabeth. Things like this are never easy

Just, ugh, Gilbett...

Okay so beautiful!
...but painful ending

OH DEAR GODS
THIS IS NOT SOMTHING yOU SHOULD READ AT TWO IN THE MORNING
ITS TOO STRESSFUL

Hm.. I'm sorry but I think this story is more AusHun than PruHun. I was expecting that at the end when Hungary went home that Prussia would be the one for her, since this was labeled Prussia/Hungary.

I'm so glad I saw Hungary say she hated Roderich! WOO! Sorry AusHun fans, I rather dislike the pairing.

Anyway, great fanfic, just confusing label for pairing. I would have enjoyed more PruHun in this, but oh well. Just try to make sure that your label matches up with what pairing is connected. That's all I got.

Random miscarriage? If it was after the first trimester, that would be damn near impossible because after that point, it would have to take something severe and life-threatening to the mother in order for the body to cause a miscarriage.

Ah... I'm sorry, but by the sound of it, it seems like Hungary really is pregnant and I have an issue with her having a baby bump so soon after fertilization. If Hungary really is pregnant, then she's only in the fourth week of her pregnancy, two weeks after the egg was fertilized and at that time, the egg would have only JUST lodged itself into the lining of the uterus. At that stage, the stomach shows absolutely no sign of pregnancy. Only at the end of the first trimester, 3 months, does the body start showing because by then, the embryo is now around three inches.

I'm sorry that I went on a biological rant on you like that, I really am, but I have a peculiar fascination with reproduction and it always irks me somewhat when people make biological mistakes like this.

U should put this in the Hungary x Austria category...there's not a lot of pruhun here. You write very well, and I was tempted to favorite it but in the end I lost hope for I will never betray pruhun! Please change the category, cuz I had hopes for more pruhun fluff and I'm sure many of your other readers did too.

I've just gotten into the Hetalia series recently and I just fell in love with this couple...though perhaps the actual couple of this series should be Hungary and Austria (who I love just as much!), either way, this story has made me love the Hungary/Prussia and Hungary/Austria coupling even more. Your story was well written, almost like a romance novel. Its light, simple and deeply moving in its narrative. Great story. I hope to read more of your wonderful stories soon.

Argh... You write very well but AusHun's fluffyness is killing me :/ I can't stand it any longer, I thought it would have more PruHun .

oh finally, i was waiting for that moment i love gentleman-like Prussia a lot, especially when he's wearing his war uniform in fanarts.

Ahh rubies, Gilbert's eyes... I love the way you tell emotions. It's like the words are elegant and they have a melody, they fit so right to the atmosphere. But two things catched my attention. First, you wrote so many "..." and they became irritating. Second, it's later revealed that Prussia's surname is "Beilschmidt", because there is a German surname like that, while "Weill" one isn't German.

oh God, this chapter made me cry. Especially the part when Eliza was thinking of Gilbert when her virginity was taken by Roderich.

ohmygod. This chapter was beautiful. If it were an oneshot, it would be good too! I'll read next chapters as soon as possible! Their dialogues made me shiver.