This is good, but it would be great to have sequel about how Harry feels/reacts after Ron dies.

Try writing a SEQUAL to this about how harry feels

Normally, I don't read slash. Don't get me wrong, I'm fine with it, but it's not my preference. That, and I think some people take it too far and it just doesn't seem real. You however, have greatly impressed me. I could actually feel the heartache and I did tear up. It was wonderfully written and I hope to read more from you.

Interesting.

Really nice job! I don't read slash, but this was well done. Love this sentence: "He was a bird about to take flight, but before he could, he needed one last push."

Good story :)

-Crescent

wow that was very good

i would love a look at harrys reaction it could be long or short- the result to his actions

- could he live the lie

- could ron survive

it definatly still has life in it if you wanted

you write very well

bekkah

I liked this story, it was well written and full of angst that a suicide story should be :).

For such a short story, you captured Ron's feelings very well. I really liked this, only that very last line almost confused me, for a second I thought Ron was still alive lol :O Anyway, great job!

This was great! Amazing!