So sad you didn't finish this story. It is really well written, humerous and absorbing. Thank you for sharing it anyway.

Nice story - it’d be good if you finished it

Ok I just read all this in 4 hours...I know its been a long long time but please you have to finish this! This is really great, I love this!

thanks for the read but cliff hanger but thanks again

Great Story! It would be a shame, if you don't finish it though ;(

You are a really fantastic writer! I love your style! Please please please finish this so I know what happens! The suspense is killing me! :/

What a concept rich in the opportunity for mischief and misunderstanding. Looking forward to the remaining 20 chapters. Thank you in advance!

so sweet... not crappy

Oh my god! That "What are we doing?" sentence made me cry. I was like: "Finally Lisbon accepted their relationship but then she..." I don't know what to say. Love this story, you caught me after the first sentence! Can't wait for chapter 22.

Are you ever going to update?!

Pleaassseee update! Ahhh can't wait to hear how they are going to deal with this at CBI!

calm on I neeeeeeeeeed an update! I love this story )

I need an update on this one. I just love this story.

I love that story ist such a great one, one of the best ones I read . Please update soon) And I don't think it matters that you've written 21 chapters and still write about the second day.

P.S. sorry if there are some mistakes in this comment (I'm from germany).

I know it's long-since-past the time this story was published, but I'm only just joining the Mentalist fandom and I have to say that I am completely in love with this fic! I absolutely love the way you put a different spin on typical office-y Jisbon, you've made my day! :)