| Reviews for Random JasperEdward oneshots |
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   PineNutPesto chapter 4 . 2/27 I liked the bar scene. Very funny. |
| SassyCass chapter 3 . 8/20/2017 Pervy girl : ) ! |
| Gubefan1980 chapter 4 . 6/24/2016 Very nice, very well done, good old Uncle Marcus, pretty perceptive. Smutty but sweet and sexy well written love the subway scene, but "tummy",seriously Edward? What are you? Four? So Alice and Bella? Very pleased that drunk though he was, Edward respected his no. Great one shots, can't decide which I liked most, they were all good in their way the library was so clever, loved how she got the librarians out of the way. |
| Gubefan1980 chapter 3 . 6/24/2016 NASA...bwahahahaha, well done library girl, if only they knew they had her to thank, they'd invite her to their wedding after they graduate. That was priceless, so cute, at first I was annoyed with her voyeurism until I realized what she was up to. Very cute, very clever |
| Gubefan1980 chapter 2 . 6/24/2016 Well, that was hot, and also pretty nice that jasper pulled Edward out of a sticky situation. Part I think was jealousy, but he was right, Edward was drunk and wasn't fully consenting. Very hot, but there was a tenderness about Jasper's desire for him, yet willingness to wait for Edward to be ready |
| Gubefan190 chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 Awww that's sweet, glad he had Alister to talk to, so what's with Rosalie's bitchy attitude? |
| Fanfic-Critic1805 chapter 4 . 5/7/2015 This was completely cute-mazing...buuut there were more than a couple spelling/grammar issues so you get a 4.75/5. I'm favoriting it anyway though! Great job |
| dA-mama23434 chapter 4 . 2/20/2013 I love this story! |
| DemeRain chapter 3 . 9/6/2012 These stories are brilliant. Thank you so much for sharing! |
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 4 . 8/11/2012 Loved these ficlets! |
| wordyma chapter 4 . 5/18/2012 I love your writing. Holy shit, you let the characters flow and it's just...delicious to read. Thank you for these, make. Will make my way through all of your stories now... |
| simba5waldo5 chapter 2 . 4/6/2012 That was great. I know u wrote this a few years ago, but I wanted to share how wonderful it was. Love jasper being persistent, but not forceful, unless he knew Edward wanted it. Great job. Melissa |
| simba5waldo5 chapter 4 . 4/6/2012 I am so sorry this has ended. Loved your stories. Fantastic job. I wish u had written more. I tried to find ur friends story you rec and couldn't find it. Maybe she removed it. Just wanted to let u know I enjoyed ur one shots. Melissa |
| simba5waldo5 chapter 4 . 4/6/2012 I am so sorry this has ended. Loved your stories. Fantastic job. I wish u had written more. I tried to find ur friends story you rec and couldn't find it. Maybe she removed it. Just wanted to let u know I enjoyed ur one shots. Melissa |
| simba5waldo5 chapter 3 . 4/6/2012 That story was great. Loved how the girl, I imagined Bella, got the boys together. Loved it. Even though there was no penetration, it was really hot. Great job. Melissa |
