I loved this story, too bad there won’t be a sequel. I’m new to fanfiction any it’s frustrating to read a story that has no ending

I didn't notice drama/romance tag when I started reading this, normally I wouldn't even give it a try, but since I did I was pleasantly suprised.
However it's not without it's flaws, around the midpoint of this sequel it went downhill, you had Daniel or Egeria have the same dramatic conversation with multiple characters which in novels is incredibly redundant since you could've written "and he/she the told the same stuff to X,Y and Z". You turned it into an Oprah show with Daniel and Egeria going around opening themselves like books to everyone and anyone. Finally, even though it's drama/romance you cannot ignore the core of this story, which is the fight against the aliens, honestly even when I realised there won't be much fighting and will instead be about romance, I still expected it will happen like, ok they're finally together, now they will kick some Goa'uld ass but the ending was really disappointing.

Holy fuck. how the fuck did they fuck that fucking much? holy fuck. that is not fucking possible. fuck.

I dont know if you bother looking so long after, good story well written, major characters given personal room, flowing story, thanks.

Excellent excellent story! Great ending too.

The only parts I did not like were Jack, Hammond, Jacob and Sam all continually trying to tell Daniel how to live his life!

I love this fic. I wish there were more like it ) thanks for sharing

Awesome story
Nice happy ending
Hope you do a third fic.

yay shes back, the question now being where this is going to go

yes a sequel, wonder if egeria will make a return somehow

Egeria and Daniel are beautiful together, this series and this story are excellent!

Loved it. All the characters, plot development, descriptions, everything was was so awesome. Great fic.

I would liked her to stay goa'uld to keep the Hate/Love history of her race... but I did see this coming with all the small hints you give... will not small huge hints hehe.

Disliked that part of the story give up everything for him love, I would had liked a different path how she got her true love back but that just me..

Hard to find good story's with goa'uld chr.

Off to keep on reading... btw I loved your first story.

:)

This was a great fic. I loved it. You write so wonderfully.

I loved this story... somehow I managed to read most of this one before I totally realized that there was a prequel... which I then read and loved almost as much as this one! I've read many of your stories and enjoyed most of them. Please keep up the great work!