*laughing so hard* Bones needs to learn to com ahead of time to his arrival. I would have loved to have seen what he did though! Jim was very professional about his conversations with Spock, then though they were oddly enough about sex! I think I just got an clinical trials explanation on 'blue balls' from an experienced male.
Thank you so much. Very hilarious reading.

I loved it so much! jaja, I really wish you would have written Bones's reaction to that scene.
I loved how human you managed the both of them and the way their bond deepened by their inherent vulnerability. Thank you so much for this brilliant piece.

and finish:

Jim was not alone in suffering from eggs are blue while the story: Boy, that was really slow, I have to work on my endurance.
The "Kill me or finish me ..." It was a tremendous comment
Although I wanted to kill them myself on the "official dialogue" after the act.
(deep puff) Wow, that was quite a night!
Too bad most juicy bits of the movie remain on the editing room floor, huh? (wink)

and again:

You wanted violins in this section? - you got them!
YouTube, will you?
If this "chef's suggestion" I will respect the guidelines
You were right!
It was wonderful!
The melody intensified the experience of reading, I usually rush with the text, but because of the tune, I had to relax and enjoy slowly.

Continues:
(smiles) I'd like to see a picture of two sleeping embracing: Sure Commercial for sweetness, more than kittens

and i repeats:
This episode also made r03;r03;me sleepy so Sachspatahti the window above the bed crash it ... does not mean he bored me

as i once wrote:

The chapter looks promising ... (snorts with laughter) "Goldilocks"? Have you thought about it yourself?

love it! poor poor bones! i bet he almost had a heart attack!

lol did they have to bury Bones after he walked in. surely the shock killed him on the spot. lol

Thanks for that

Intereseting!

I LOVE McCoy's mother henning!

Poor Jim, now he's got 2!

OMG! how much I envy Bones! hahahahaha xD

Wow. Just, Wow. What a well written and thought out fic! I enjoyed the whole premise and execution. The developing relationship between Kirk and Spock (with smatterings of McCoy thrown in for my personal enjoyment) was a joy to read. I was so pleased that we got to witness Kirk emotionally vulnerable but still the cocky b*stard we know and love, while Spock was able to let his human, emotional side take over but still be the logical and controlling b*stard that we know and love!

Hot and enjoyable all around!

I don't suppose there is any amount of pathetic begging that would get you to continue the love story of Spock and Jim in further adventures?

"The End" had to be the suckiest words I've read in a very long time in relation to any fic I've read.

This was pure, unadulterated delight reading this and I wanted it to go on and on and on... I KNOW I'm not the only reader who feels this way about the wonderful storytelling in this fic.

Among many other things that I loved about the story, is how you never crossed the line into sickly-sweet sappy crap that made Jim look and act like a 14-year old girl. He was seriously emotionally hurting and the comfort you delivered was just divine!

Darling! And so sweet!

Cheers!