Nice but this is probably your last story I hope you come back on fan fic bye!

Aw, that was so sweet. I love the pairing Gohan/Trunks. I love submissive Trunks.

I loved this story so much!

Could you please write another chapter to this story?

That was great! I like this pairing a lot because of all the angst and fluff that it can have simultaneously. And also, Gohan is Trunks' 'master', which makes your mind automatically wander to the gutter.

I like that you had 18 groping on Trunks and teasing him about his crush. It's great when the androids do pervy stuff like that. Trunks getting jealous of Videl and finally snapping and confessing his feelings. Speaking of Videl, I was impressed that you included her in this story without turning her into some sort of psychotic stalker for Gohan. Too many good fics get ruined by character bashing.

sniff..such a sweet story!