Great so funny and cute

I love how you write seriously! but i just can't picture this pair...somehow I don't see Minerva marrying someone else after albus...or having discussions like "Is he better than me?" with him...

I do like Severus being their son though...

Ha ha ha ! Obviously, later is better than never xD

Great story, really cute! Please have an update!

Aw that was a sweet chapter.

Great chapter, and for me I think in character Filius is much like albus so I really liked Minerva's thoughts on this.

Aw that was cute, and who knows maybe Filius does love sweets.

Oh wow, that chapter really plays games with my mind lol but I do like it. There's so many interesting ideas in here, like Severus being Minerva's son, and I love Minerva's line about fighting better when she has nothing to live for.

Yay! Another chapter... This was good. Very nice with Minerva's thoughts and such.

Keep writing!

~DancingWithRoses

Yay! Another chapter! I would absolutely love if you would update this again soon! Few little grammar errors but if I am correct, you are not a native speaker of English? It's still very good though!

~DancingWithRoses

Not something I'd ever picture, but bite me if it wasn't incredibly written :)

Love the 'You fight good' line.

-Rayne