This story is freaking awesome! Seriously, I have been looking for great grey!Phoebe/dark!Cole fics for a long time where the Charmed Ones are still a part of their lives. Please please please continue this-I know that you haven't updated in 4 years, but people are still reading this and waiting anxiously for you to continue and keep up the good work! Hoping that you haven't abandoned the lonely Phoebe/Cole section of Charmed, as I firmly believe that this is the best ship (and best characters) on the show, though followed closely by Piper/Leo and Prue/Andy.
-Ismeme

OH MY GOSH THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTLY PERFECT AND NOW IM SUPER SAD THAT IT ISNT FINISHED BUT I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT EVEN IF YOU NEVER FINISH IT THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY

i truly hope you update this story soon

I'm addicted to this. :D I've been reading this non-stop since like 2 AM and it's now almost four and just dfslklkfldk! This is just so amazing! :D I'm on the edge of my seat.

Sigh, I'm really over-due with this reviewing. I'm so far behind in many stories. D

Both ch. 27 and 28 were great; you captured the increasing bleak atmosphere of the sisters as they struggle without Phoebe, acting as if they have been defeated for good. So they definitely need the arrival of their mother, they have been without her for a long time.

Hm, part of me is glad the Oracle is dead but the other part of me doesn't want those two demons to succeed. Hopefully Cole and Phoebe will fry them into delicious sausages or french fries.

~~SpeedDemon315

Mmm...

Interesting bit of work, to say the least.

The circumstances leading to the origins of the new reality make perfect sense- Phoebe couldn’t go up without getting killed by Shax, so keeping her somewhere unexpected while Leo helped her sisters serves as an effective ‘compromise’-, and the subsequent development as Cole planned his attack on the Source was interesting, even if I can’t help but think that Cole seemed a bit overly ruthless; for all the Halliwells’ doubts about him, meeting Phoebe DID leave him with a strong desire to change his ways, and he always tried to FIGHT his demonic instincts...

Still, aside from some doubts about how quickly Prue and Piper met and explained their history to Paige- you should have given them more time to get to know each other before Prue and Piper ‘activated’ Paige’s powers; it would have made it seem more like they wanted to know her for HER rather than to ‘fill the gap’-, things progressed fairly well once everyone got into place.

Still, Cole AND Phoebe being ‘corrupted’ by the Source certainly makes an interesting and promising twist, and I look forward to seeing how things develop as the sisters find themselves dealing with both the Source and the fact that Phoebe’s pregnant with the Source’s heir.

You might need to include a bit more detail at times, but you definitely have an excellent CONCEPT here, I assure you.

This story would be great to do for the atualtv show from the beginning. I like the way that this story is going, please keep writing it.

This is a great story. Phole really is my main pairing for Charmed, and I was so sad to see Cole killed. I like how you really do seem to have the characters in character.

Darklighters are awesome. This is my first time reading this story, but I hope we'll see more of those powers as the story progresses. I'm guessing we will seeing as I doubt you'd give Phoebe those powers without a reason.

Loving it

Didn't let me down with this one! Loved the chapter, and I hope the next one will be posted asap! Though I understand that people have better things to do than write and post all the time. Hehe.

Looks like Patty has a plan! I can't wait to see what it is! Also Maseras is a bastard for sure!

What has happened to the BoS? Didn't Phoebe leave it behind in the penthouse? Nevertheless, awesome chapter, I can hardly wait for a new one.

I can't beleive that I missed 3 chapters. Sorry about that. I like how you have the story progressing. It will be interesting to see how Mom deals with the girls. And also how the girls will feel once they find out Pheebs is preggo.

What are you doing, stopping here? I need more. ASAP!