| Reviews for Coming Home and Family |
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Guest chapter 7 . 6/1/2014 Please update I love this story |
snn7b chapter 7 . 6/20/2013 wow this is was good... Looking forward to reading what will happen next... |
Nichole33 chapter 7 . 9/13/2009 "He also could not believe how much maturity all of the women around him were showing. Sometimes he was starting to feel as if he was in the twilight zone" - Loved that line :D Another good chapter! Can't wait to see whether or not they get the house! |
Anamia 1 chapter 7 . 9/13/2009 Doin' good. And Julie should not be worried about living with Tim. I'll live in a cave with him. Especially with him wearring a leopard skin and nothing else;-) |
AndreaElizabeth94 chapter 7 . 9/12/2009 awesome update soon i hope they get the house! |
Anamia 1 chapter 6 . 9/12/2009 Hey, there is supposed to be a new chapter, but I can't open it. What's wrong? I want to read this story. It's interesting. Buhuhu. |
AndreaElizabeth94 chapter 6 . 9/6/2009 awesome update son i love it |
Nichole33 chapter 6 . 8/26/2009 Really good job! I'm glad that Tim and Mindy were able to talk some sense into Billy. Looking forward to more :D |
Deena chapter 5 . 8/24/2009 I find your story realy hard to read. Separate the dialogue into different paragraphs. For an example just open up any book with dialogue and you will see what I mean. If you do that I am sure you will have more readers and more reviews :) |
Nichole33 chapter 5 . 8/23/2009 I wasn't expecting the Tim and Julie bit, but I definitely like it :D And I just want to smack Billy about the whole Kae thing. At least Tim seems to be doing the right thing where his sister's concerned. Keep up the good work! |
Nichole33 chapter 4 . 8/20/2009 Love where you're going with this! I love Tim with the Taylor's, and I can't wait to see what happens when Tim and Kae finally see each other again. Keep up the good work! |
shaybay55 chapter 4 . 8/20/2009 awesome chapter! its a little hard to read though. |
SPNAngel16 chapter 3 . 8/13/2009 they're so close to meeting. cant wait to read more into this. |
Nichole33 chapter 3 . 8/12/2009 Oh, it looks like Tim may be getting ready to try and find his sister...hopefully :D Keep up the good work! |
shaybay55 chapter 2 . 8/10/2009 awesome! love it! although it was a little hard to read! |