Sweet!

God, this is so beautiful! I love re-reading this one, babe! :)

Are you going to participate in Kate's rewatch this evening?

Hope things are well with you and yours!

Definitely the best post-season finale fics I've read so far. Please continue to grace us with your writing.

...& what a great comeback by you!

Loved it ...you had their characters spot on...I could so see this happening between them - a literal Bones, not fully understanding what Booth has been trying to explain to her...the guilt that she feels for not picking up on the first signs of Booth's illness, & - in her own misguided way - now she is making sure that that won't happen again.

**this… this … inability to separate fantasy from reality.”

...hmm...did Booth just admit that he fantasized about being married to Brennan. lol.

Loved the way that Booth/you explained that he knew that it was just a dream & the way it made him feel & that he wasn't confused about what was reality.

**It’s not something that will show up on an MRI, it’s in here” – he thumped his hand over his chest – “and will be here for a long time. That’s something you have to learn to live with, just like I do.”

“Because it was the way your breath caught when I touched you that I remember. The way your eyes widened when I stood too close. The way your heart pounded when I kissed you. That is what is inside of me now, Bones, and maybe it should be inside you too.”

“That is what is inside of me, Bones,” “That is what I wake up and remember. What I see in my mind. What I feel in here,” he repeated the chest thump of earlier, “Now it’s inside both of us.”

...*sigh* this was billiant...beautiful...perfect...almost brings a tear to the eye *surreptitiously wiping corner of eye*

**END*

...What?...No!...Can't be!...You can't leave it there...You can't do that to us...to B&B... :-(

Again, loved it all...great to see back here & hope to see more of you. :-):-):-)

Welcome back :)

You capture Brennan and Booth spot on. I hear their voices as I read. Right from the start you have them IC, Booth confiding in his partner and Brennan seeing him as a patient.

I love the detail with Booth's too short hair, a stark reminder and explanation why Brennan alerted Booth's physician. What a way you chose to have Booth get Brennan to see things from his angle!

if there was a onomatopia four the wolf wistle i would insert it here. _ that was very nice, perfectly in character.

~HIKARi

I like the emotions on display here.

Hi there,

Very clever...I really like how you wrote this...He explained it very well to her too...

Looking forward to more from you...

Ger

nice one-shot. I liked the ending very much! NOw all they need to do is have more moments between them that will stay forever.

any chance you'll do another chapter or two on this one? I think it deserves it.

yeah, thats right she knew! go author! sometimes i really reckon bones needs to be put back in her place!

Guh... um... welcome back?

This was so delicious... and perfectly IC - Brennan wanting to make sure he was alright and taking his recounting of his mixed up memories so completely literally as per usual.

*Maybe he was losing it and maybe he really did need an MRI. How else could he wake up and think for even a second he was married to this woman?*

LOVED that!

The thought of Booth walking around with these vivid, almost memories is kind of heartbreaking to me. I adored him giving her some actual first hand evidence of what he meant!

*“That is what is inside of me, Bones,” he panted. “That is what I wake up and remember. What I see in my mind. What I feel in here,” he repeated the chest thump of earlier, stepping further back away from her.

“Now it’s inside both of us.”*

Guh! HOW much would I love to see this on the show?

SO wonderful to read fic from you, lovely, you've lost absolutely none of your touch, believe me ;)

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Wanted to review on LJ, btw, but it is loading v v slow for me today *grumbles*

great chapter. will she do anything about that feeling? Look forward to more soon

Oh no you didn't end it there. Omgosh, I would really.. there's so much more here. Please please continue. That was just a teaser of what could be so much more of an amazing story. Now that she realizes Booth is right that is.

Well, just in case, I put an alert on it.

Gah that really got intense there at the end. Booth is so passionate that when he gets like that my heart rate speeds up a few notches too. Mercy, to be in her shoes.

Wow. I really loved this one.

Beautifully written and just perfect before going to sleep. Thank you.

Great story. Well written.