Reviews for What If? … An Alternative to Order Of The Phoenix
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 7 . 7/16
Nice job!
stevem1 chapter 7 . 4/30
This is a good story.
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 7 . 4/30
Amelia seemed good to me.
The names are funny.
I think Harry is already paranoid.
Voldy locked in Azkaban.
Kira
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16
Yl
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 7 . 4/5
Enjoyed it.
Vampireking40 chapter 3 . 3/11
I love the way Bones took down the Toad who really through she would still have a job by the end of the day. The toad knew others knew about what she had been doing. I would say Fudge even knew she did it.
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 7 . 2/23
Interesting
NarutosBrat chapter 7 . 11/25/2019
If you're having trouble finding new ways to kill Voldemort, that proves you're a normal, well adjusted human. There are still plenty of ways if you're willing to delve into the sick and twisted.
Pratik chapter 4 . 11/14/2019
Bla bla bla lets just bash Dumbledore and make up stupid stories.. What a waste of time. Ridiculous story. If you want to read a good story, read this by StarFox5

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rigger42 chapter 7 . 9/11/2019
The insistence that Tom had to be killed when the last Dark Lord was imprisoned always seemed wonky. If there are horcrux, don't kill him and his wraith won't go out try a possession or to reanimate. That would give plenty of time to find them. If there are no horcrux, why is he different from Geller?
rigger42 chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
No kidding, any kid dressed like Harry was described would draw lots of attention, and the Granger's would draw attention due to the contrast.
KnowInsight chapter 7 . 9/9/2019
well that was fun
MrsFH chapter 7 . 9/8/2019
I enjoyed your story very much. Thanks for sharing it.
Itack23 chapter 7 . 9/1/2019
Thank you for your work!
A story where Harry isn't a combat starving beast but more of the cautious side. Sure, there are some that prefere the overpowered MC.
But isn't it more enjoyable to have different personalities each story? :D
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
There's an entirely different reason for gatting Harry ALL new clothes besides how poorly he HAS to dress. Do you really believe that good ol' Fumblemort the great( fraud that is! ) wouldn't put tracking charms on most if not all of Harry's clothes just incase Harry decided to do a runner? Fumblemort is CONVINCED that the prophecy that's about as vague as you can get applies ONLY to Harry. But if you truly read it the prophecy actually tells you NOTHING! It only says The Dark Lord. But nothing about what country he's in. Nothing about WHO is going to VANQUISH him. Nothing about WHEN this dark lord is supposed to be operating. By this prophecy, it could be the past present or future. Fumblemort merely made assumptions about what he heard. Then decided that destroying two families was fine as it was for the greater good. It became a self-fulfilling prophecy from thereon. And Fumblemort has absolved himself of doing anything like taking direct action to be the puppet master behind the scenes.
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