| Reviews for Ash's Schedule |
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   C'sMelody chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 Gosh, I laughed so hard in the part you mention teletubies... xDD |
| SecretlySnowQueen chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 Wow... Ash could write an esay on every part of Misty's day. I like this story. |
| magiquill9 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010 Nice follow up! |
| staedtler17 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010 really cute! loved it! :) i actually looked at my clock! it was 'free time' for ash P |
| ash and misty chapter 1 . 4/8/2010 boys at that age r so clueles... boys at every age are cleuless thats y we love em. |
| AshandMistyLove chapter 1 . 2/27/2010 awesome fanfic! i am too a big fan of eevebeth fejvu! i've read the tennis racket, let them bake a cake and cavern of a million colours and urs is up with those! AshandMistyLove |
| PokeshippersShadow1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 So cute! 3 Wonderful job! |
| Steveaaml chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 Hey Great work! Nice companion story to Eeveebeth's, and great work on discoving Cavern of a Million Colors. Brilliant no? Anyway, I really liked this! Great clueless Ash, very nice writing style, and very charming :) Congrats on being awesome! Steve |
| Coffee Craft chapter 1 . 9/28/2009 Aw! That was so cute. I was hoping a little smootch on the cheek at the end but I can keep on dreamin'...*sigh* Samia-chan |
| PikaForce chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 Aww! I love this! :) Great job! I'll have to go and read Misty's schedule now... ;) |
| PotoPerson chapter 1 . 7/27/2009 Grr! Ash hasn't woken up yet! Darn... I love his schedual and how cluless he is. It makes me chuckle. Now onto Misty's schedual! Keep on writing!;D |
| Ronmione x3 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009 Haha, so cute! The arguing made me laugh, and I especially liked the TR parts, LOL. Ash is so dense and I love it. ;-) |
| NeoMiniTails chapter 1 . 7/26/2009 So I had a long review before my iPhone started acting weird. It seems to do that when I'm writing reviews for stories! Your story was cute, but you have one problem in a lot of your writing. You sound too much like a romantic and a pokeshipper which invalidates the realness of your writing... Tone should be different when you're writing as a character... Especially when you're in their direct point of view. Everything they say should sound like them so that when you go in for whatever pokeshipping moment you want, you can validate it. Still liked it very much. Very cute but still you need to learn when writing as Ash or even just as a male character on how to make it sound or how not to sound more like a hopeful fan than a hopeful character. Well done in general, gave me a couple of chuckles and I liked how ending time for sleep is different from the original. |
| ShadowStealerr chapter 1 . 7/26/2009 hahaha i loved this story! it made me laugh a lot you should do a sequel with older Ash in Sinnoh |
| sayjay1995 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009 This was interesting. Now I'm gonna go look up the one about Misty XD |
