Daw, this is cute.

Nicely done! Beautiful domesticity fic, sad at the right places and over all very cute. I love so much stories dealing with the three of them being a family 3

Not bad, well done mate. I lie the fact that Snake is the way he is and that Hal is trying to be a father-figure...which just gave me some nerve-wracking thoughts when I imagined him and Emma raising children (shudders).

It's been a REALLY long time since I've allowed myself to sink myself into a MGS fan fiction (mostly because I've been hella busy) but I'm ecstatic that this could be my entry back. Well written and beautifully visual without feeling pretentious. Great idea, well excecuted. I honestly have no complaints. I felt every bit of the emotion it was supposed to have to-I actually teared up a little! Amazing story!

Beautiful, poignant and touching. I adore the description of the new photograph. It reminds me of Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children, where a new photograph of Cloud and his family was shown at the very end of the film. Gloriously, beautifully written-and much appreciated. Instant fave for life.