Lol. Hot and fun! Nice

How cute! I can just see Ichigo giggling at a moment like that, and Masaya being kind and considerate even during a BDSM roleplay. Please write more about this pairing, it's sadly underrated!

dat waz kinda cuter in the end

You write well; this scene was good in itself, though I never saw Masaya as having such a kinky side. He always seemed to me to be the kind of guy who'd play it safe. No reason for you not to write it though.

On a different note, I don't see why you feel the need to swear at anybody reading your fic for the crime of not writing smut. Tokyo Mew Mew is aimed at children and young teenagers; the lack of kinky sex is hardly surprising, and your author's note means that anyone, whether they write well or badly, gets exactly the same earful of abuse.

Cute I love MasaIchi.

Um... what's BDSM? I forgot to ask in my review for your PaiReta one-shot.

At the start i was a little confused, but i quickly got a hold of it. It was an unusual IchigoXmasaya fic. But a clever one too! Good job!