Reviews for The Pennington Files: Murder on the Excess Express
Mariogeek chapter 10 . 8/24/2018
So
Was this just like a giant troll lol. I think I will wonder for the rest of my life who did it...
Purpletshirt chapter 10 . 6/22/2016
...it's been 6 years though
Purpletshirt chapter 8 . 6/22/2016
At the beginning you seriously almost die of embarrassment for Luigi...I had to leave my laptop with my hands in the air thinking repeatedly that I was done and i couldn't help but feel super bad for the Mario Bros. Then i thought of a really bad pun it would have been perfect after the princess stated "I knew it" i thought it would be funny as a response to this have Mario say "I would tell you whats really going on princess but, Luigi would kill me."(that was just a really bad pun) Love the series can't wait for more updates.
Purpletshirt chapter 6 . 6/22/2016
Sigh...Twilight...really i may be a teenage girl but truth be told i'm more of a loner...i suppose
Purpletshirt chapter 5 . 6/22/2016
I still think it was toad...he was the bartender. It couldn't have been Bow because Don gave her sisters their jobs back...i think...after Bow confronted him. And if it was Luigi it would actually be more likely Mr. L. Luigi would probably have a heart attack if it was really him...as for Bow if i'm wrong about the job she would make since seeing (or really not seeing in this case) as she can become invisible...wow that was a baaad joke ;)
PaloozaChu chapter 10 . 12/1/2013
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! XDDDDDDDD
PaloozaChu chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
Is Toadette..err..uhh...DEAD?
Noo she was my favorite. DANG SHIMI, Y U STARVE YOSHI?
PaloozaChu chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
Oh nonono, Wimpzilla won't die! He's an author! HE'S TOO YOUNG I TELL YOU
And my review's too late. he lived, right?
PaloozaChu chapter 7 . 11/30/2013
Okay Waluigi is SUSPICIOUS!
Unless Bow was involved too! WHA WHAT IF THERE'S AN ACCOMPLICE?
PaloozaChu chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
:D Toad has evidence :D
I'd have Yellow just barge into Toadette's hospital room and use her awesome Viridian powers to make Toadette jump right up and hug Toad :DDD
PaloozaChu chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
BAHAHAHA! I LOVE SEEING YOU SHUDDER IN DESPAIR! AND MARIO THE PENNINGTON! XDDDDDDDDDDDD
And..err. I forgot what to say DX
Wait, Toadette's COMATOSE? WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME, TOAD? WHYYYYYYYY/? _
And the chef would shi- I mean, spit in food the next time... Oh no, food isn't meant to be a one-use potty DX Horrid slip-up you almost had there Chef.
PaloozaChu chapter 3 . 11/30/2013
Err.. No I can't find a murder, due to something called GULLIBILITY.
And bow seems likely so she can DISAPPEAR.
PaloozaChu chapter 2 . 11/30/2013
Ah, Pennington. THAT CRAZY WHACKO PENGUIN.
PaloozaChu chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!
The end.
Bridgettefan231 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I'm absolutly amazed at how hard you worked on this story. I have a pretty good idea who did it. It was nun other then

*One Dramatic Pause Late*

THE WAITRESS

It is proven that Don was poisoned by his drink. The drink which only Toad and Waitress had come into contact with between the time when it was made and the time of death. And of those two, she is the only one who had access to the kitchen where she could stash the murder weapon (The thermomoter used to poison Don's drink) in Shimi's box. And to cover herself, she planted a second thermometer in Luigi's room while everyone was focused on Don. But when Mario became suspiciouse, she had to take action. She had to take everyone's mind off Don's murder by faking Popple's murder. She used the contents of Shimi's box to make false blood and stashed the box under the bead as to hide the murder weapon. But she couldn't do this alone...isn't that right WALUIGI!

*Insert Suprised Gasp Here*

Waluigi was the one who convinced Popple to overdose his pills, eventually leading him to pass out. He was also the only one besides Popple in the room where the murder weapon was stashed. This to make sure no one would find it.

Take That Pennington!
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