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Aww... so cute... I love thuke!

as always its great. i like percabeth but also thuke

I really can't say that I like it or dislike it. To me, it's only one word: depressing.

so heart felt. i cried my heart out. you should add another chapter, bring luke back, make him hers and she his. _.

yea it is a bit much, but tht's the truth of her life, basiclly

this is sad. but it's friday the 13th anyways, so what's the harm?

it's not much, it's brilliant! great story.

I don't think it's too much. I think it makes perfect sense. Really great stor, in my opinion.

I loved it. It was well-written, and I loved how you wrote about Thalia. )

I also loved the line "She storms into battle like the spawn of thunder she is." Very good. D

It was sad, but I guess it had to be.

Great job!

...my god, you are spectacular. -adore-

You're right! You are extremely good at writing depressing stuff.

Loved it, just got a little frowny during it, but I still loved it! Very cute!

Nice work, like always!

Can't wait for whatever it is you're posting nexT!

:) Jordan

This is really good, sad, but still good. I could feel the emotion in the words.

that was sad that she didn't have anyone specially Luke. It was really great_

Splendid would imply something different from what this is. This is a beautifully written story with a sea of emotion lurking under a sheer surface of words. Amazing really, how you bring memories and desire to the surface, stabbed with love, regret, and longing. Very well done, no emotion left out, and all thought, memories, and dreams painted with deadly accuracy. Worthy of any Thalia/Luke collection.

Thalia Castellan.