100 years and Bella only discovers her power on the first day of school in Forks? Seriously lame. Her gift is lame too. Being a shield is so much more powerful than projecting thoughts into people's heads. And the only humans who talk to her just happen to be descendants of people she knew before who have the exact same personalities as their grandparents?! Also, Edward seriously just walks up and kisses her just like that and she lets him before running away in years? So unrealistic. This story had so much potential but you really didn't write it well. I'm not reading anymore.

I like the story so far, but I think this chapter with Jacob was annoying and kinda pointless. I can't really picture him being involved in this story in any way. I also don't see how he fell in love with Bella since Bella was too broken to have that relationship with him that she had in New Moon.

I also dislike that Maddy took Bella to Seattle while changing into a vampire. A newborn in the middle of a big city filled with tons of humans makes very little sense. And then Rosalie's POV wasn't a good choice. Too many POVs is frustrating.

Victoria, is where ?

My name is madison pierce. How did you come up with the name

this is a great fic. please finish it.

This story is so exciting and i cant wait for more

awwwwww please update :(

he told bella he didn't love her soooo why the fuck is she longing for him after all this time? nothing more pathtic then a girl that cant let a guy go! he doesn't want you (as far as she knows) so why be all pathetic?

WTF i'm sorry but... She walked into Alice LIKE A BOSS! And should of sent her flying LIKE A BOSS :P

is this the end? if so there should be a seque with tanya...i don't know where to go with that but i'll l eave that to you.

I loved the part where Edward was saying he couldnt like any thing no more because bella was not there .

Great story!

I love this story. I hope that you plan on finishing it at some point! :)

hi

yay continu