It was brilliant! I am waiting for more! Please continue this story.

so this hasn't been updated in a realy long time, so I don't think it ever will be..But, I think this is starting off really well, and I'm very much interested to see what happens next..I doubt my one little review will change into this fic being updated but either way y'know that you started it off really well. Good writing!

More. XD

Really like the writing so far. Your Shepard, red hair and green eyes, large scar, was also the first way I designed my first Shepard when I bought the game. Lmao. It's awesome!

Update soon.

Loved it :)

So far you are off to a great start, and have me wanting to read more. I do hope you continue this story. It's been awhile since i read such a well written story.

Very impressive piece. Switching between the two perspectives really made the introduction of this story come alive. I feel like I really know the characters in new and interesting ways now but at the same time they are mysterious.

Whatever style you decided to continue writing in will no doubt continue to be impressive. Looking forward to the next installment.

Wow. Loved it, and I seriously can't wait to read more. I really like how you get both parties point of views in here, it helps so much with character development.

One nitpicky little question: Can salarians drink coffee? I mean, I can understand how it might contribute to their fast speech, but I'm just curious if it might actually kill them or not. It would have been cool if you'd maybe thrown in a small sentence of clarification. Something explaining how Garrus knew the stuff wasn't deadly for them but he still didn't understand how they could drink it, or how he knows it might very well kill him.

Anywho, I really like the way this story is going, it seems like a very well thought out plot, and I do hope to see many more chapters ahead.

Awesome chapter. You are doing great with this story! only like 1 or 2 small grammer issues and that's it. I can't wait to here the rest of this story!

Absolutely lovely. Very nice. Descriptive, detailed, but definitely got the point across. I guess I can't write anything other than adjectives, but great job! ;)

Hey! I saw you posting on bioware forums, good to see a Garrus/Femshep fic from you :) Keep it up, it's getting interesting!

This is very interesting. You came up with some good ideas that no one else hasn't already used which makes this story fresh. I love the personality Shepard has and I can't wait to see Garrus's personality. You should keep writing. It makes people happy.

I'm excited to see where you go with this. Your other fic was excellent, and I can see this one will be just as intriguing.

Oh am I glad to see this! I'm glad I'm alone in the apartment because I did a happy dance that would have embarrassed me horribly had anyone seen. You fic would have been worth it, though!

I liked the flashback to Shepard's childhood. That's a very untouched period in the game so there's plenty of flexibility. Besides, I love learning more about how people have envisioned their Shepards. The introduction to Garrus worked well too. You depicted beautifully how he is often conflicted between traditional Turian behaviors and his own desire to go beyond rules and regulations.

Keep it coming! I'm addicted!