Reviews for Maelstrom
knightvalen chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
BBxMello is the best!
XJhoker chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
OMG, this was so amazing.

I totally imagine M beeing obsessed over L and taking out his frustration on BB. And vice versa.

Another Note shows That M actually cared pretty much about L, and well~ BB is his copy.

I love BB/M's fics, unfortunately there aren't many good ones out there.

This one is simply great *-*

Hope you keep on writing~!

Forgive my sucky english !
Lectorem chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Wait. How the hell does this have only 10 reveiws? This is probably the best, and I meam best lemon I've ever read, if you can call it a lemon that. Not only did it satisfy my craving for all things dark and twisted (something very hard to do), but it also got me interested in this pairing, and mad eme realize a whole new side of Mello and B that I hadn't thought existed. The way you wrote it just made the whole thing flow, and it sounded so beleiveable. I'd try to add more, but I won't even try to tell you exactly how this made me feel, because it is impossible.
Yami Neon Crayons chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
That is so hot loved it D
Kari Twilight Mist chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
YES! I love this couple because I know they have a lot of passion (not necessarily the good kind) in common. Mello said her relates to him himself. There are so few Mello/B fics though :(
Shadow Dancer666 chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Hm, I like this. I'm surprised that there isn't more of this pairing out there. But anyway, good job with this!
Cherrytoast chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Wow. I cried at the end.

Twisted. Slightly smutty. Sad. Beautiful. Amazing.
Raayy chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
WOW! That was so so so well write! And I loved the plot. I LOVED! BB/Mello is so wonderful. I like to think BBMello as dark and twisted just like you put here. Wonderful, really.
Akane Kuruta chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
...I don't know why, but it was sad.

Maybe because I'm a pansy, but I don't think so.

Don't get me wrong, it was really good, but...

Ugh. I don't know.

I just feel bad for both of them.

(Elena Hitachiin)
Threshie chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
*claps* Congratulations, you made BxMello plausible and believable! Twisted, indeed...and very well-written. This pairing has an extra appeal to me because my favorite pairing for L is Mello, so...here might be where Mello ended up after L died. B supposedly died before L, but I love AU stories so I can overlook that, LOL.

I'll have to check out more of your work!

~Threshie
NickSparkss chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
I think it's funny how screwed up they both are, and how much pleasure they both get out of it. Beyond, from being called L, and Mello, from imagining that Beyond is L.

I liked this, I'll have to check out some of your other writing.

Thanks,

Nix
Not telling chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
That was really good! I liked the twistedness and the wickedness in it and it was written quite well and it was an very interesting story! The twisted love...for L! Nice work...keep it up! :)
Erin chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Love it. I'm sorry I have no constructive criticism for you, but I adore this completely.