great story but jean is 18. plz don't be up set your story really is amazing i wish i was brave enuff to do somthing like this

I would really like to know how this story ends. There are times when the characters seem ooc but then it just fits. I can't really explain it but you have managed to capture them in a new way that can coincide with what we all know and love about them. That's a rare talent, one that I hope you will continue to pursue, as you finish this story preferably.

Okay, so now I see you left us on a cliff. Time to update!

Okay, I'm going ahead and reviewing since you made the joke about the 3 reviewers. ;-) I usually wait until I get to the current end of a story if it's in progress when I start reading it. I just thought I'd go ahead and share a little early encouragement. I have a little trepidation as the story isn't complete and am reading in absolute fear of chapter 7 and where you will leave us all hanging. ;-D

As for the story itself, I think you have a great imagination and the flow to the story is quite good. While I noticed a few typos in the first chapter (and we all have those, even with a beta sometimes), I didn't pick up on any in this chapter. I think you are also doing a great job with the accents and the descriptions of events.

Just love ROMY... *sigh*

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Great story! Hope you write more soon! :)

Very intresting. I can't wait for more. I like how your doing how it's not love but it's strong likeing and showing it takes time for love to blooma nd they aren't in love yet.

Like it, plz write more soon!

hi im a new admireror- opps that has got be spelled wrong- i love this story and cant wait til you udate... carol i felt she was kinda shifty beneath the nice... scott is ideed selfish to want to keep rogue from who she now want when he is still up under jean...trouble comes this way for the brotherhood...hope they make it... lance n rogue moments are cute and i adore... more please.. romy 4eva]

Really good. Can't wait to read more.

Well I must say this is prity good. Keep writing or I will sware on all that's holy, unholy, and everything inbtween I will send every kind of hell u can find in the South. Other than that may your muse stay by your side.
From Dixi with Sweet-tea

im loving this story! cant wait to catch up!

Please please update soooon

TBH I'd completely forgotten about this story, I had to re-read the previous chapters again to remind myself what happened but I enjoyed it just as much as I did the first time I read it! D This chapter was great definitely worth the wait.

To answer your questions: I don't think this was too much in one chapter, I love long chapters with lots of details but if you think shorter chapters would mean faster updates that would be good too, just don't put any less detail or description in. But that's just my opinion.

Oh can I request that you put which songs you were listening to at the top of the chapter, I like playing the songs as I read but I never want to scroll down as I might spoil the end of the chapter for myself.

Aza x

I think this is got to be the longest review I have ever posted lol

pleeaasseeeeeeeeeeeee update:)