Reviews for What Comes Next |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2014 Skeletons was great, this was hilarious. Loved Kagome. The only thing is that a "stag & doe party" is the couple celebrating together. Stag being the male, doe the female. Great job. Looking forward to reading more stories. |
critic chapter 1 . 4/12/2014 story rating from 1-10 6.5 I like the beginning of this story it contains alright details use of inappropriate language [now for the critism all your story is, is a beginning what about the middle and end I bet you were just bored and wrote first thing that came to your head how long did this take 10 minutes take pride in your work get your head out of the game, and play this writing add more make this writing a winner instead of LOSER cuz that's what it is the harsh critic is out [I did this for your own good] |
BlackR0seBud chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 Awww that was so cute! Haha poor InuYasha. I just finished reading Skeletons in the Closet, which was a great story btw ;D, when I found out you did a little sequel/bonus chapter. I loved both of your stories! Keep on writting! :D |
MasensPrecious1989 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012 beyond cute and adorable one shot continuation of S.i.t.C.! XD LOVE YOU STORY! *jump at you for a bear hug* lol |
kagomecathanyo chapter 1 . 8/1/2011 OMG! OMG! OMG! I JUST HAD A FUCKING KANIPTION! THE PAGE KEPT CLOSING DOWN AND RESTARTING WHEN I TRIED TO REVIEW! OMG! MY COMPUTER HATES ME! well aside from my mental illnesses, T~T OMG soo sweet...ang HILARIOUS! |
Blackdiamonds-16 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 It was so beautiful! |
Askjdhsdkjgdsgsdk chapter 1 . 7/2/2011 Cute chapter. I loved the way Kagome was screaming at Inuyasha. xD |
cj chapter 1 . 5/2/2011 aweh! so funny! i DIED when she was yelling at him, lololol |
inuyasha.lover33 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011 hehehe wow i wonder who is worst in pregancy Kagome or Kagura? ... -_- great fic XD |
KannibalPopkorn chapter 1 . 2/12/2010 Q BONiTOU! this was hilariously funny! |
Namike chapter 1 . 12/29/2009 I only just found this story... I HAD NO IDEA YOU CONTINUED But LOL! This story made me laugh out loud, big time! You still captured the humor. This story just rocks! XD Great work! |
SuketiSakuraBlosom chapter 1 . 11/22/2009 love it! |
XxInume-TakahashixX chapter 1 . 11/5/2009 lol i like the breathing joke. funny |
BSlove chapter 1 . 10/10/2009 Very good and funny! I loved it just as much as the prequel! Keep up the good work! Tootles |
Xalainu chapter 1 . 7/25/2009 Aw! The baby is so cute! oo Anyway, I have chapter 4 of me and my friend's story up! Can you please review it? |