Reviews for What Comes Next
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Skeletons was great, this was hilarious. Loved Kagome. The only thing is that a "stag & doe party" is the couple celebrating together. Stag being the male, doe the female. Great job. Looking forward to reading more stories.
critic chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
story rating from 1-10
6.5
I like the beginning of this story
it contains alright details
use of inappropriate language
[now for the critism
all your story is, is a beginning
what about the middle and end
I bet you were just bored and wrote first thing that came to your head
how long did this take 10 minutes
take pride in your work
get your head out of the game, and play this writing
add more
make this writing a winner instead of LOSER
cuz that's what it is
the harsh critic is out
[I did this for your own good]
BlackR0seBud chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Awww that was so cute! Haha poor InuYasha.
I just finished reading Skeletons in the Closet, which was a great story btw ;D, when I found out you did a little sequel/bonus chapter.
I loved both of your stories!
Keep on writting! :D
MasensPrecious1989 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
beyond cute and adorable one shot continuation of S.i.t.C.! XD LOVE YOU STORY! *jump at you for a bear hug* lol
kagomecathanyo chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
OMG! OMG! OMG! I JUST HAD A FUCKING KANIPTION! THE PAGE KEPT CLOSING DOWN AND RESTARTING WHEN I TRIED TO REVIEW! OMG! MY COMPUTER HATES ME!

well aside from my mental illnesses,

T~T OMG soo sweet...ang HILARIOUS!
Blackdiamonds-16 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
It was so beautiful!
Askjdhsdkjgdsgsdk chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Cute chapter. I loved the way Kagome was screaming at Inuyasha. xD
cj chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
aweh!

so funny! i DIED when she was yelling at him, lololol
inuyasha.lover33 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
hehehe wow i wonder who is worst in pregancy Kagome or Kagura? ... -_- great fic XD
KannibalPopkorn chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Q BONiTOU! this was hilariously funny!
Namike chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I only just found this story... I HAD NO IDEA YOU CONTINUED

But LOL! This story made me laugh out loud, big time! You still captured the humor. This story just rocks! XD

Great work!
SuketiSakuraBlosom chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
love it!
XxInume-TakahashixX chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
lol i like the breathing joke. funny
BSlove chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Very good and funny! I loved it just as much as the prequel! Keep up the good work! Tootles
Xalainu chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Aw! The baby is so cute! oo

Anyway, I have chapter 4 of me and my friend's story up! Can you please review it?
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