Oh wow. Okay. Let Kiba be alone when you make future chapters and finish this story. I'll follow for updates.
Don't make Ino and Kiba end up together. Cause he smh. I'm still upset from previous chapters cause of Kiba and Yukari.
UGHHHH. Okay. Maybe then can continue dating for , but Ino doesn't allow sexual things go in between them. Can I also please request more affection in a non-sexual way please! They're cute together. This is a nice story. Finally found a KibaIno story that's A NOVEL-WRITTEN STYLE. Most are like 1k words and less. It's sad.
I forgot but I think I cried here and there along the way reading this. I'm not sure. But I know I stayed up all night to read this and I went to sleep at 7 in the morning and only got three hours of asleep before I finished reading chapter 28. Now it's like 1 in the afternoon haha. Hopefully you finish this soon! Don't give up! If you have writer's block please pm me! I don't check messages on hear usually so you can hit my up MoonshineLove2 on Wattpad.
I hope you write more KibaIno stories! Or and ship involving Ino (usually the Rookie 9) . I actually hope to find more good stories when I visit your profile after I finish typing this and post it

Sorry I just skipped this chapter and last chapter. Still upset over the fact Kiba spent a night with Yukari

I don't like how Kiba didnt recognize Yuka

...Well, damn. All I can think is that Kiba is going to be in deep shit with Tsume.

Has this been discontinued? If so that'll be very sad. You have a good style of writing and there isn't enough Kiba/Ino out there...

Your title is very misleading. I avoided this story until now because I thought it was going to be stereotypical 'fall in love on a mission' type. I decided to give it a try anyway today and was more than thrilled to be wrong. I can already tell it's going to be awesome!

This story is pure brilliance. The whole catching-a-shinobi thing is is really cool idea. Thank my sister for introducing me to this masterpiece of a fanfiction. Keep up the fantastic work, you brilliant writer.

This absolutely cannot be the end, please don't do this to me.

Ahhhh I just caught up on this. What a cliffie. I hope you finish one day. Something I love abiut this story is the sensuousness. It's unique and lovely and only flirts with purple prose.

this is gonna be a great ending!

love this story! can u update?

This is an old, old story I had bookmarked in a folder that I run through about twice a year. I was so excited when I saw that it was updated! I remember vaguely what was going on, so some details are a little sketchy, but I do recall that it had a unique plot. This chapter was very interesting, if confusing because I had to think back (and skim a few of the previous chapters) to remember what happened last.

I am sure that Tsume is going to knock some sense into her son.

Ooh, update! You know, I'd even forgotten this hadn't ended... But, a sign of a good fic is that I remembered which story it was right away and most of what had happened as soon as I realised it hadn't been finished!

(Doesn't help that I missed most of my notifications for the last months or so 'cos Virgin Media decided notifications meails were spam...)

YOU'RE BACK! (howls at the moon) ... well no not exactly, there was your dead space story going on. it rly kept me grounded every saturday if i ever forgot what day it was when i'd get an email notification. apparently alerting authors also alerts chapter updates for all their stories? idk. unimportant.

HELLO. and what a fabulous chapter we've got here! the change in your writing is very much welcomed. it's nice to see how you've changed in writing and what you have new to offer. this chapter was just raw. raw emotions, ferral, destructive. loved every bit of it. can't wait to see the showdown between tsume and kiba.

i'm excited to see this story coming to an end, and i'm sure it'll be fantastic.

Wow! This really took a turn that I didn't expect, with Kiba going all feral on everyone. Loved it, as always though. I've missed this so much. Glad you're back to this. Don't be too hard on yourself, your writing is superb as always and flows just fine with the last chapter.