awesome chey. keep writing i want to know what happens. and o ya. its me lydia

Lol I really like this story! I also like the names you picked.

hey good story! u should check out my lion king story! its a crossover but i'd bet u'd love it!

I love Lion King and I suppose Zira returning would be a major plot twist. continue you meanie lol.

Great update. Poor cubs. D*:

This was really cute so far with the cubs. I do hope you update soon.

nd, if it's not too much trouble, would you check out a few of my fics? i apologize for how simple they sound. thank you very much.

Zira's back! I hope you do a good job with her character!

Update, lol

-Luna

yay...I STILL WANT A FERRET!

good job chey.

Good chap...Shenzi sounded a little out of character, but then again she's pretty impossible to keep in character anyway. It's not really a big deal.

Oh, and just a bit of advice for the future: when a character sighs, it's not considered spoken word, so it shouldn't be in quotes. So Kovu's line while he was arguing with Shaka should have looked something like this:

Kovu sighed. "You're right. I'm sorry...I'm just really stressed."

Hope that helps, and keep going!

Real good chapter. I'm very interested. UPDATE SOON!