Please come back! Its been 4 yrs :,(

Stupid internet gave or but I finally finished! Great story, awesome plot, oh and that twist! Ryuuma as Zoro's father? TOTAL SENSE! Now because of that I'm having speculations that Zoro is from Wano Kuni snag might be a defendant of Ryuuma.., the latter probably not but I'm rooting for the former.., Yay for Ace and Smokey! But wait, what about Sanji? Does he stay with Zoro? Zoro obviously didn't hear Sanji calling himself his wife so what now? Agh dammit Zoro! I was wondering where Chopper was this whole time, but that was definitely cool.., robo Chopper, HA! I was also wondering where Nami was, that was also hilarious.., Paulie must be pissed and happy at the same time.., I'm wondering about his debts though, they both love to gamble but that's got to be frustrating..,

Great fic, loved how it played out. Would prefer if the action and smut scenes were longer and in better detail but that's just because I'm a blood thirsty pervert.., don't get me wrong, your writing did not disappoint..,

Oh you know what would be cool? An epilogue.., something like how everything is, they're all living together and what not, Sarah's recovery, how Zoro and Chopper get along, Luffy and Usopp's reaction to Chopper, if Sanji is there or not.., hmmm I should probably learn to make my reviews shorter, I'm sounding too demanding.., I apologize and am going to leave it at that.., loved it, very cool and great work! 3

I'm loving this so far.., I admire the water 7 setting.., made me think of that Zoro filler episode, "It's not broccoli! ITS MARIMO!"

the ending of this chapter got to me.., SmoAce is one of my favorite pairings, I know this fic is complete and I just got to chapter 5, but I'm really looking forward to seeing how they develop if they develop at all.., if they don't, would it be too greedy of me to request some SmoAce? Like maybe what happened at that event, then what happened when ave got arrested, and their fight? if love to see then make up but I wouldn't be do disappointed if they didn't.., I always saw them as forbidden lovers, but then again I guess most of us do..,

agh there I go rambling.., I enjoy how thorough you are in your writing.., when you said mystery you weren't kidding.., I'm hoping to finish reading this by tomorrow night.., I'm not sure how to end this so...

Fin

Yes, Zoro, you need a bigger home. You have to bring your mom and brother home. :) I so love this story! Now, what about Dr. Hogback? Was he caught or killed? I get the feeling there's at least one more chapter out there for this. Will you finish? Please? I'd really like to know how it ends.

So... I'm seriously hoping that wasn't the end... Because that would make me angry. Cliff hanger endings are the worst and absolutely not fair at all. I'm begging for at least ONE more chappie... Please? -gives Chopper eyes-

Love the story btw. I will definitely be rereading this in the future! :D

Awww the end was great I wonder why I haven't read it before but I wish there was a epilogue. Great story !

MOOOOAR~!

OMG! awesome story! thank you! i only wish for more zosan action, like more character build up, or like relationship, but i still really enjoyed this story thank you! :D

Great story! The ending leaves something to be desired but it is still good. I hope that you add an epilogue or somthing! :)

OMG! i just love love love love this story! I can't beleive that I missed your story! *slap forehead* but now i have redeem my way and added it to my favroite! :)

hahaha. Truth to be told, the first couple of chapters, i was getting anxious that this won't be a ZoSan story. Because there was no sign of Sanji or anything! Hahaha. I know i am such a dork. How can this not be ZoSan? you practically write about them two. And not only that you hidden Sanji so well i didn't realize it until Sanji told Ussop that his name is not Sonny but Sanji. Hahahaha. I can't believe that i didn't see that one.

Gosh, i just have to love Zoro and Sanji! They were fighting like cat and dog in a familiar way as if they have been friends forever as if they just didn't met each other the other day! :) My favorite part out of all their interactions has to be that one where Sanji meditate with Zoro. This just totally shows how much Sanji has become important to Zoro. I just love how having Sanji close to Zoro like that can calm Zoro down. _ hehehehe. Although i think that scene where Zoro and Sanji has finally stop flirting with each other and get it on was a damn favorite scene of mine too. I mean two hot guys going at like bunnies? oh heck yeah a favorite anytime any day, ne? ;)

Woah! I was soo shocked when Sanji kissed Ace! O_O i sooo did not see that coming or see that Ace and Sanji dated each other two years ago. Although i just find it amusing that Sanji and Zoro knew Ace and Luffy but not each other. Damn i wish Zoro and Sanji could have meet each other sooner! But i guess meeting now like this does make their relationship more exciting. :D

Awwww, i just love Ace and Smoker. They are of course my favorite second couple in here! My heart was hurting for them because they were not together! T_T I think it was Smoker's fault for blowing it up in proportion. I think it has something to do with Ace's crime business. But I am sooo happy that Ace and Smoker got back together again! i just love them! My heart was pounding when Smoker was about to let Ace leave. I was shouting at Smoke to stop Ace from leaving! Thank god he listened to me! :)

Somehow i just knew that the assassin was Zoro's father, especially when he got that sword. It was pretty intense when Zoro and his dad just stared at each other when they realized who it was. And i just feel sooo bad for the dad! I can't believe he killed himself. He shouldn't have! I mean he did what he did because he thought it was right and to save his wife. So i don't think he should have died! I mean Zoro could have had his family back again! I mean his mom was alive! So his dad should have been alive too! *pout*

hahaha. i just love Sanji! I just love how he said he is the wife! "Well as your wife, I'd like to know how many people we're going to be taking care of." Again Sanji is just damn adorable!

Omg! I am most shocked by the revelation that Chopper has been close all this time to Zoro! I mean they live in the same building and Chopper has ridden in the elevator with Zoro. Omg! I can’t believe it! Hahaha. I am sure Zoro is most floored by it than me. _

Again I just love love love love love the story! So please please please update soon! I am dying to see the happy ending for Zoro and Sanji and the rest of the people! So please please update soon!

P.s. just letting you know that I changed my penanme from Behan to TheEndofTag _v

is this the last chapter? AWWWW...i still enjoyed it a lot! keep on writing cuz ur awesome at it!

I can't believe I forgot about the eMail-Alert that I got for this! It's one of the very, very few stories that I'm truly interested in and totally on the edge to read more about because the idea behind it is awesome. And now I'm here to see that it's actually the last chapter... :( I'm glad I could find into the plot again although it's been such a long time (and it's rather complicated ;)).

Anyway, as for this chapter, that was quite a rollercoaster of emotions, and so very, very tragic. The revelation about the events taken place between Ryuuma and Moria was heart-wrenching. I think you did a great job in the way you explained it with that bitter conversation. It really hurt just reading it. :'(

Oz was kinda... Oz. I mean I could totally picture him again although it's been ages since I've read/watched the Thriller Bark arc.

Despite all the fighting scenes, to me the most vivid part was when Smoker and Ace were driving in the pickup. Probably because you put in a few more details, and of course the effects of a car moving around are a bit easier to picture than zombies, cyborgs etc. ;)

Concerning the details, I personally would have liked a bit more of them for the factory setting. The scenes in there were very action-y and heartbreaking (in the positive sense) but the surroundings were rather vague and hard to imagine, and I think that they might have created even more tension and atmosphere in particular in this climactic point of the story. So tbh, to me it felt a bit like something was missing.

And whoa, the revelation with the Mum - just /after/ Ryuuma... ahhh. So sad! You're so mean! ;) But it was a great, unexpected twist.

Loved how cool Sanji handled the relationship aspects no matter how well Zoro played the unfazed, stubborn guy. "Well as your wife, I'd like to know how many people we're going to be taking care of." was definitely a winner. XD He simply ignored his behavior because he knew how Zoro really felt. Aww!

The characterization was also great, in particular Chopper was cheering me up. In general, it felt like you really put a lot of thought into making all of them stay true to their personalities even if it was probably very tempting to go all cheesy in the end given the situation...

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! I wish I could be the 100th review but well... In the end the number of reviews doesn't really say anything about the quality of a story. To me, this was one of the most original and interesting stories I've seen in the OP section. I hope you'll write another one. :D

i looooved that story. the last chapter seemed a little rushed but everything else was great. im happy that he excepted chopper.

loved it

steve

Yay! I finally finished reading it all! This has be a wonderful story and I just could not stop obsessing over! And I don't even like AU! Which is weird b/c I love this story to pieces! You are so great in your writing skill it's amazing and this has been nothing short of an incredible ride. Thank you so much for writing this! I just wish there was more cause I don't wanna stop! Thank you again and I hope to read more from you in the future! 3

...I've missed this story for such a long time, and then I'm even one to write you a late review ;

I've figured out that I'm completely addicted to your stories, it's even so bad that I've started rereading your stories... again! XD And just like a pusher; I want more! I want a 'new dose' if you get what I mean o lol

But I love your stories, and this one too... I just wish and beg for that the next update wont take a half year again, my nerves wont be able to wait for such a long time agan *LMAO!*

Zoro finally found his father... and then looses him all over again... not even being able to share a single word with him. What a life they both had... and then his father, walking around and thinking that Zoro's mother, Sarah, never would be healthy, looking so sick and working for those monsters in hope to help his wife... sadly he didn't know that she was all fine... poor man... but I'm glad that Zoro at least got his mother back... and a little brother... for not to say that Sanji want to stay with him

Can't wait for the next update, to see how it all will end up like, how things will work out... and then I can't wait for yet another great story from such a wonderful talented author as yourself.

I look really forward to it!

I wish you all good!

*hugs*

~Pernille T. Boldemann