This is a great piece of work you did here! It was very enjoyable.

silvermouse :D

This was one of the most hilarious stories I have read in quite some time. I like your work. I don't think you have exactly encommpassed the characters, but I doubt that was actually your goal. A tip: make sure that it is always clear who is speaking. At one point, I thought Holmes had a dog.

i thought of the kittens lol! this is brilliant :) please update im really liking this story :D

Lovely- I always thought that for some names, people must WANT their children to hate them or something. Though I confess a definite fondness for the name Sherlock. *sigh*

thinking of the kittens,

misunderstoodemon

Do you actually have this book? If so I bet you if you turn to the S section Sherlock will be in there. I noticed they never looked at the S's.

I like this story very much. The Sherlock Holmes you describe in your story does look like to the character described in Doyle story (it's something very important in my opinion : I have read too many fanfiction where characters have a personality too much different from the one they have in the book). And your plots are funny. I also appreciate that you explain some elements like for exemple the alcoohol rate :). Please do continue (and sorry if my english is bad : it's not my native langage)

That last line is a very appropriate response, coming from him. Fun stuff.

I SAVED A KITTEN! Oh my gosh, Nimrod , Brick, Baruch, they're all so horrible. Also, I rather like the name Algernon. But here is my two cents. The two most horrible names I have ever heard are:

Orangejello and Lemonjello(Or-on-jello and le-mon-jello)

Horrible huh!

*cackles* I was gifted with a fairly common name but spelled in an unusual way, which I think is the happy medium all parents should strive for.

Oh, this was an amazing hoot! Poor Victor! But Holmes was so sweet saying he didn't appreciate gawkers.

One English quibble - when the room smells of formaldehyde, the word is spelled 'reeks,' not 'wreaks', as in wreaking havoc. 'Tis a quibble, though, and in no way detracting from the story (which was hysterical). Pardon my English teacher-ing, but I go back to work next week and am in The Mode. :)

And I adore this series so much! I'm looking forward to the next one with great anticipation.

OOH, I remember a horrible name. Seriously, in college I worked on a church bus route in Chicago, and this little girl had been given the name Lemonjello (pronounced Leh-MAHN-jehloh, but spelled like the fruity dessert mix, y'know?) Poor poor kid. Poor brainless parents (hm, maybe that was one of their brains in that jaw that so sickened poor Victor...).

I am thinking of the kittens.

This chapter was very amusing! Haha, I guess I'm so used to reading "Holmes", I never thought about how it would be to live with a name like "Sherlock". But I can certainly see him being particularly touchy about it. XD

Well, I can certainly agree with Trevor about Pythagoras needing to burn in Satan’s realm…dumb old math. I really hated geometry.

That being said, this was absolutely hilarious. I love drunk Holmes! Now, on to the next chapter!

Interesting. Very interesting. Supremely enjoyable. In fact I rather liked knowing what Holmes was like drunk. Except I would have thought him a silent drunk. More brooding. But alas. Also I am taking Geometry next year and I shall have to remember that lovely neumonic(spelling?)device.

Will we be seeing Musgrave in later chapters? He was quite competent in trignometry.

And a couple of trivial pointers in explaining a geometry problem:

(I assume that the circle is an incircle, inscribed within the right triangle ABC.)

Firstly it has not been explained which side (36 degrees or 56 degrees) has been assigned A, (assuming B is 90 degrees) so while one knows how to solve the problem, one cannot follow Holmes and Trevor as they try to solve the problem unless one solves it and goes back and then substitutes the labelling.

Secondly, one cannot assume that something that looks tangential to a circle is indeed a tangent. It is either given that the the circle is an incircle,therefore the sides of the triangle are tangents or there should be data to justify that the sides of the triangle are tangential to the circle, and that it is indeed inscibed in it. An assumption in geometry is not only illogical, but also fallacious.

Poor Victor! I feel for the man, I truly do - I'm a whiz at algebra and all that but stick me into geometry and I drown. Failed it twice in high school, and me with an IQ of 141. *shakes head at unfair world*

That being said, ROTFL. This was one of the most amusing things I've read in a long time! I loved it, every bit of it, and I look forward to the next installment!

Huh... just where have I been for 6 years of studying in a university... college seems DEFINITELY more interesting... dialogue effortless, Holmes in character, and the dog is cute! (BTW, where was it when the hell broke loose?) - continue, please! (though it can be read as a whole thing).