| Reviews for Carousel Lights |
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beautiful memories chapter 1 . 7/13/2010 Wow. I loved this :3 Awesome chappie! :D |
Felling chapter 1 . 9/1/2009 That was beautiful. If only it happened in the real thing that way, it was just so touching. (: |
xXbunnyholicXx chapter 1 . 7/8/2009 omgomgomg, THIS WAS SO CUTE! The ending was very enjoyable, and the reason as to why ikuto was leaving was original AND unselfish. It is NOT crappy. way better than anything I could've written. the part about the carousel's colors was cute, and I could really see amu saying that. keep writing! looking foward to more SC! stories from you. |
Natsuya801923 chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 d'aww this was so cute! u have to continue this! :D loved the ending x3 I REALLY hope they'll or at least confess but I don't think Peach-pit will make it cliché or maybe they will~ but I wonder what the papers that Ikuto's mother have says? O.o but have u ever considered about Ikuto going to college? XD great job! (could u please check out my version? but don't worry, I didn't copy! I forced myself not to read this until I finished mine ) |
Miki-chann chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Amazing! :] LOVED IT! I actually cried there ;_; |
xx.DotDotBoom chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Awe. I could actually see this happening in the manga, panel by panel. Or in my dreams. Whichever. But anyways, I like it a lot. Vertigo literally gripped at my stomach when I read Ikuto say "won't ever see you again" in the manga. But he'll come back! You should totally continue. Bye bye! |
FBGoldfish chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 OMG I've read Ch. 42 like ten times already. I got so giddy it's ridiculous. And I would totally cry if it ended like this. In a good way. I swear if it ends without them saying how they feel about each other I'm going to...I don't even know what...but something..evil. Hahaha. jk. Anyway, Good job! I'm totally a fan of this prediction! |
black neko hime chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 i liked it. beautiful. please keep going. |
Amuto20174 chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 I think this might happen! Your prediction for chapter 43 might be real |
appupuppu chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 *sigh* i wish chapter 43 could be like this... i really like it! *in fangirl dreamland* |
OhmyOlicity chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 beautiful story! |
Ka-chan chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Good job. Yeah, we can dream. I hope for chapter 43 amu will tell her true feeling. |
SleepingRiot chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Wow... that's so beautiful. I cried. I really think that would happen that way too... sorta. More angsty though - being the person I am. ;P Possibly not grabbing Amu THAT hard to make her look at Ikuto, but more gently and such stuff. Even though Shugo Chara may use some of the japanese words, I prefer to only use hte honorifics instead of the word's itself now. I used to write all these words, Baka, Matte, Kokoro and stuff - but for those who might not know them might be confused - I was too when I first read a Shugo Chara story. So, maybe next time no Japanses words other than, -san and stuff. This was very well written, I liked it. Good job, there's nothing much I would say about it that's gotta be improved. And I hope you decide either you want to continue this or just keep it. I think if you keep it the way it is - you would always have this VIBE about it, and if you continue it, it'll change and another aura would replace it. Do your best! Sincerely, AL |
DevilishBea chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 OMG! I thought of something like that too! plz write more ideas whenever you feel like it! since I am too lazy to write what I think, I have over 100 fanfic ideas in my head all happening at the same time lol |
oxCuteKataraox chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 OMG! I HOPE IT REALLY COMES TRUE!~ XD THIS IS AN AWESOME ONE-SHOT!~ _ |