So nice

Oh my Gucci! Awesome. You are a sex screen god/goddess.

Kinky as hell. I like it.

8.8 eekkk I love it! It's so cute. awe Oliver is so cute. I'm dying it was so cute.

Wow, holy shit.

I'm pretty sure right now that I am a seriously perverted person for enjoying this fic so much. Wow! 10000 words of pure sexy hotness! U r a my god now. Amazing job!

Oh jesus fuck me! I think i came in my pants form reading this. What was it about 26 pages of pure sex? FUCKING AMAZING! YOU HAVE SOME SERIOUS SKILL!

love this fic

holy crap.

Holy Crap.

HOLY CRAP!

well done.

Although this story is a little creepy and wrong, I surprised myself by liking it. Is there a sequel in the near future?

that was a really good story i really enjoyed it im mean im no a reader and this story was long usually i would have stopped reading by now but this ws way to interesting i was suppose to go to bed and i sayed up reading this good job very good job indeed

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Son of a mother duck!

This was so very amazing, thank you for writing. :)

This story is absolutely vulgar and terribly written. I love slash/yaoi, and I loathe the fact that you have torn it from its high standing and made it so terribly crass. As a homosexual male, I must state that I have never once considered saying "boy pussy". It's just crude. GAY MEN AVOID PUSSIES, THAT IS THE ENTIRE POINT OF BEING GAY. Your language is foul, your grammar is atrocious, and this story is an insult to all that it good in fanfiction.

I bid you good day, dear lady, and I do hope dearly that you learn from this review. Improve your writing at once!

this fanfic is awesome! I've never read anything as hot and heavy as this in my whole life!

Wow this is a very amazing story. The fact that you based it off of the one fact of Olvier having sensitive nipples (lol nie btw) is just so cool. I'm suprised that I had the attention span to read it because it was so long, but it was worth it. All the other slashes I've read pretty much die compared to this. AWESOME job!