Sooooo good! You wrote in the characters voices so well! I could really hear them speaking through the lines you wrote!

Just found your tale. Thanks for a lovely retelling!

are you gonna complete this story? I really want to know how it ends! I love it! It's soo good! Please continue! 3

N'aww. I feel bad because I haven't reviewed every chapter like Grumbello but that's only because I have been too eager to read the next chapter because it's so full of awesome! So don't kill me for not reviewing. Take this review as a review for every singly one of your chapters. They are amazing, your writing is just utterly wonderful. You are great at writing the characters. I think Emerson is wonderful tbh. Cholive smut is hot beyond belief and you made me yearn for Pushing Daisies so much I went and bought both series on DVD. Now I'm sad because Cholive isn't canon. Ridonkulous.

Thank you very much for this awesome, awesome story. I am so glad you continued it :)

Mate you make me blush everytime you mention me so stop it :P

(Just kidding, secretly I crave the attention XD)

(Kidding, I don't need the attention, I'm popular enough :P) Now which personality is really mine? XD I'm such a weird kid :P

I couldn't understand why Ned was so hostile...it was kind of a shock really, but then when Olive and Chuck told him they were pregnant and he almost cried...it was so beautiful *sob* :) Well done mate. :)

Stay safe buddy

Grumbello

I was starting to miss you mate, though I'm glad you have your spurts of inspiration.

I'm very happy that Ned agreed to...help the girls out. And it's so cute that they want a kid. :)

Good to have you back mate.

Stay safe

Grumbello

WOW!

Thank you so much for coming back and re-visiting this story.

I was really happily surprised to find a new chapter. I couldn't remember how many chapters your story had so clicked it open expecting chapter 29 to be the end but there you where with a new extra piece.

I'm waffling, I'm just so happy, I love this story. Thank you.

Oh My GOD! You're back! I missed you!

Actually, scary thought, I was going to PM you the other day just to say hi...but you beat me to the punch!

SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER! I like how Olive was constantly telling Chuck that it wasn't sanitary but then when push came to shove, she shoved chuck right onto her. ;) Loved it. Very well written.

Nice to hear from you again.

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

Aw man! That's the cruelest ending of a story I have ever read! It leaves me wanting more...and I can't get more *cry*

Aw, one fan...times the love I have for this story and it's similar to about five hundred fans screaming your name *agh agh agh*

I was so nervous through this chapter whilst Olive and Ned were being secretive...I was thinking horrible things like "Ned and Olive are leaving", "Olive is breaking up with Chuck", "Olive has a terminal disease" etc...etc... and I was thinking 'YOU CAN NOT end this like that...' What can I say, I am paranoid! But you didn't...THEY'RE GETTING MARRIED...!And they were talking about kids...Oh I am soo happy.

You are a wonderful writer mate and I will always read your work. I am so happy that I could read this with you. I will miss this story and I hope you find inspiration to create another masterpiece.

Love you and your writing for ever

Grumbello

Ha, birth control. That's funny because they're girls... (Thank you captain obvious) XD

O, I love dip...I've got the soft drink...unless you want something heavier which, if that's the case, you'll have to supply...I'm underage both virtually and literally. Bloody virtual bar kicked me out last week! I thought I had this great fake Id...obviously not!

You've only got one chapter to go *sob* No *gasps* I could keep going if you'd like? No...stuff it!

Damn! I forgot to get you a farewell present...I wonder if the shopping center is open this time of night? Maybe I'll go in the morning. Oh but what to buy? Crap...I'll get back to you on that one. My sister stole my money!

Thanks for a wonderful chapter mate...I like how Olive was scared of Lily and Lily was continuously threatening Olive...feel the love!

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

Now about that going away party...? ;)

To prevent myself from repetition, maybe you should just read over my previous reviews...add them all together and presto, you have the review for this chapter :D No, that's lazy isn't it...ok...

I am SO glad Chuck could tell her Aunt and mother, and how she told them instantly about Olive, and how Lily goes...'You're a dyke?' Charming! Lovely word that, dyke...

Anyway, well done...looking forward to those couple of extra chapters...better than this story finishing. I just HAVE to throw you a bye bye party...virtually. Wonder who will come if I invite them...and how they're going to come...hold on I'll have to think about this :D

Stay safe mate

Grumbello

Sixteen to twenty-five are good chapters. I really like your writing

Wow, a pure smut chapter. Well it was very well written! :)

Dare I say it, I am jealous of this Courtney girl...*puts fists up* I am willing to fight this girl for best review...come on ;) (Just kidding...and cause I know she could read this, I am just kidding Courtney ) I mean I don't even know who she is :P

*sings* You wrote smut! You wrote smut!

YES! Loved it! Very well written...though...

There was this one section that made me laugh really hard. Here we are in the middle of a very hot scene and:

'Their lips connected once more, tongues exploring the other’s moth with familiarity.'

Yes I am also extreamly familiar with my moth and others moths...why a friend of mine's moth managed to fly into a light, poor thing got fried. My moths name is barry. Barry Moth...rather nice kind of bug if you ask me :D

I'm taking the Micky out of you mate, sorry. It was well done and we all accidently miss a letter or tw...you knw how tht happens every now an then ;P

Ok,

Stay safe

Grumbello

Gah! I'm so sorry! I wanted to read these chapters but I've been grounded from the computer and have not had the time! I've loved these past three chapters. Olive and Chuck are truly the perfect pair. You are such an excellent writer. I wish this series could have continued so we could have more of this. -Sigh- If wishes were horses...ah well, I'm enjoying it immensely anyway.