Reviews for Harry Potter and the Muggle Mess
udm17 chapter 1 . 7/21
Great story.
gabzep chapter 1 . 7/18
Oh my Vernon Dursley related to the Crouch family! That’s a good one.

Sorry Albus but it seems things got better with you gone! Great story
littleditto chapter 1 . 7/8
Another great fic. Interesting to see how things have changed
mumphie chapter 1 . 7/2
A very interesting story. Would love to see how it would play out.
stevem1 chapter 1 . 6/8
These oaths are very creepy. I suspect that a lot of otherwise law abiding citizens would be leaving Britain.
DoraLupinTonks chapter 1 . 6/2
I agree with you completely. dumbledore was chief warlock, supreme mugwump and head master of Hogwarts, he had 3 powerful leadership positions and he did nothing, just went along with the prophecy and never did try to save Harry! i don't know why harry still believed dumbledore in cannon even after understanding his motives! dumbledore was not that different from voldemort, he just wore a white hat and called himself the leader of light!
Sammi chapter 1 . 6/1
Wow, this was interesting! I liked seeing how more competent the wizarding society became, but also saw how you sowed the seeds for conflict in the future, should you continue! Very interesting!
kimjo2 chapter 1 . 5/30
But still, Hogwarts without him could only be better! Thanks so much
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19
I like this story. But a more fun title would be ‘Vernon Dursley saves the magical world’ )

Thanks for writing it, a fun read. Was left wishing for more.
SomeoneWithTasteDoA chapter 1 . 5/3
Seems you thought you'd continue much further than you did? A lot of shit in here is brought up, set up, and then just never used again, because you wanted 40 different branches in this 13k word story. Pretty disappointing, overall.
Tracey Young chapter 1 . 5/1
Great read. Goes ‘behind the scenes’ and touches onto what might have been.
GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 4/24
interesting, entertaining and realistic.
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Charlee56 chapter 1 . 4/19
More generalizations than direct 'Harry-Action', but a good, if short yarn. Well done!
The Punmaster chapter 1 . 4/14
Awww that's cute
Mionefan chapter 1 . 4/5
A somewhat dystopian view of the outcome at the end, but interesting for all that. Draco, of course would be trained at Durmstrang, but in reality, would probably be eventually expelled for his extreme views.
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