This is really cute:)

It's Awesome...!

How you describe it is telling that Luffy always had faith that Zoro would always be there beside him for him...! XD

And i hope it's always right...!

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By the way, there's something confusing me;
First, Ace was Luffy's constant, and then Shanks.

Should not Shanks was the First?
After all, Luffy able to meet Ace because Garp toss him to Dadan after Shanks left and made Luffy determinate to become Pirate King... Right?!

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Anyway... Nice! ;)

Ugh beautiful. No one can replace a firstmate, that's for sure.

I loved how Robin used food to describe it to Luffy xD that was so likely to happen :3 and AWW i adore firstmate/captain fluffiness!

An ultimate good work! :D It's good that this fic is just about nakamaship and not love.

"...the relationship between a pirate captain and his first mate is a special bond of friendship that would never fade."

This was my favorite part! 3 :)

Really wonderful! I have read so many Luffy/Zoro Nakama-fics, but this really is one of the best! It was simple, just like Luffy and not to cheesy...I enjoyed it very much, a perfect description of their relationship...!

it was nice

good work

Love this! It's a nice way to describe Luffy and Zoro's friendship. And I can't think of a better way than for Zoro to be illustrated as Luffy's constant. Because he's always there, never leaving Luffy's side, even when all the others did at one point or another. And I liked the little mention of Shanks and his own first mate Ben. Their relationship is a great parallel with Luffy and Zoro.

AW!

I love the log pose analogy; never heard that before.

This made me feel all fuzzy inside! And that's hard to do when the story isn't about Sanji. Kudos.

Nicely written.

In short, I loved it!

very nicely written. I especially like the line about Luffy being like a kitten trying to goad tomcat Zoro into playing. One of the better Zoro and Luffy works out there.

That was a very beautiful, non-yaoi, in depth character story. The reasoning was wonderful and all in all it was just cute. Wonderful, yet light, description of relationships.