Reviews for Hal's Story
Draekaaru chapter 7 . 7/12/2018
Can you please update this? I know it’s been a few years, but please?
56006 chapter 7 . 5/27/2015
Update?
SilverHeart1171 chapter 7 . 9/26/2013
Wow :O This is awesome! please write more!
major wallace chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
awesome please more
major wallace chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
awesome work more please
Freedom Guard chapter 7 . 6/30/2012
Interesting idea...hoping to see more when you have the time to update.

Anyway, I recently sent a review to Angry lil' elf and included my plan to take his request to make a crossover with Halo and Fable. I mentioned that I want to borrow the frame idea of the story being an AU like yours and his and planned to as his permission and yours as well.

Naturally I will do things my way to make it my own so all I need is your permission and his.

Hope to hear from you all soon and I wish to see more of your own work.
ArchAngelGundam chapter 7 . 6/15/2012
Found this a while back, but then forgot about it. Glad I found it again.

Keep up the good work.
Tankred chapter 7 . 6/14/2012
Dude, this is an awesome story. I really like how you made The Chief a massive Will battery, he's scary enough to enemies normally but with magic he'll have gone from 'Green Death Machine' to 'One-Man Apocalypse'.
Mattmaster112 chapter 7 . 5/21/2012
you should continue this. it is an enjoyable story, and i wish to read more of it
killroy225 chapter 7 . 4/28/2012
please keep this story going!
Killuminator chapter 7 . 4/11/2012
Chindu y u no update ?
Ace-The-Hedgehog117 chapter 7 . 3/29/2012
this is epic, UPDATE!
Luigi-fan470 chapter 6 . 1/13/2012
LOL, why does everyone hate one fable II and III, personaly I played fable II first and LOVED it, so much so that I wanted to download and play fable 1. I like the story of 1 but I detest the combate system so I only beat the story mode and called it a day.(plus I couldn't get the DLC stuff for some reason) Any who, at least your aren't like some wrighters who drop a story because they don't like where the canon went. Keep updateing it's realy good.
Nosaki 'Halfbreed' Shulon chapter 7 . 10/23/2011
I'll admit, i was rather skeptical when i first noticed there was a crossover between Halo and Fable. Ok, i had some serious doubts, but I was bored and needed some more reading material. And i am actually glad for it. This has turned out to be a very good story and flows together rather nicely. I do hope you plan to continue it!

-halfbreed
D00rFr4m3 chapter 7 . 10/1/2011
I found the little shout out to Halo in Fable 2... amusing. I was angry as a wasp when I found that chest sitting there, but couldn't open the darn thing bc my mom was to freakin' cheap the pre-order it for me. Yeah, I didn't speak to her for awhile. Anyways, The MC had a set of armor, a sword, AND a rifle. Heres the desc for it:

Long ago, when Albion was still under rule of the Old Kingdom, a rift in space opened a portal between dimensions. Through the rift stepped a warrior of immense power, clad in green armour and carrying a striking crystal sword. Though he never revealed his real name, he was known to all as Hal. Few enemies were able to withstand the firepower of his sophisticated rifle. Oh, it can ONLY be found inside the Box Of Secrets on KnotHole Island. Basically, you sort of sacrifice somethin' to the box, and for what you sacrificed you get varying prizes. To get this, you have to sacrifice a Pure Experience Extract Potion. So..

Later,

AkeOokami- BrightWolf.
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