| Reviews for Invincible |
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   Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 11 . 1/4/2014 PLEASE for the love of Jak and Lovable furry Daxter UPDATE |
| Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 6 . 1/4/2014 BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Oh yes that last line is sooo Daxter |
| gameloverx chapter 11 . 7/1/2013 That last line gave me one hell of a laugh! Please updater this soon! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/23/2013 Loved it! PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| Lady-Brover chapter 11 . 3/30/2013 Oh my gosh! I'm SO happy to see this story updated because I thought you had completely abandoned it. Ah, I must say I'm sad to see Human!Dax go, but now I'm very curious to how his new transformation is going to change things. |
| bloody raptor chapter 11 . 3/20/2013 Its nice hearing from you after such a long time. |
| Ecomadness chapter 10 . 5/10/2011 This story is epic I hope to god u update |
| LUNAR-W0LF chapter 10 . 12/13/2010 Wow. All I can say is that this story is absolutely ENTHRALLING. I love it, seriously you need to update this ASAP. Because I don't think I can go for long without this story. Anyways, I like how you play out Jak's mute-ness you make it realistic and understandable to the readers which, I've found, doesn't happen all too often. Great job on that (: Once again, wonderful job and update soon for my sanity! |
| MonsterChibiJaxmine chapter 10 . 12/1/2010 It's so tense...it's so good...please come back! |
| M-Angel 05 chapter 10 . 8/28/2010 Wow it took me 3 hours to read up to this point. Love the story so far. Found it in a friends favorite list and could help but read it. Have yet to find any mi-spellings, unless ya count Daxter's way of talking. Keep on writing it! Oh is Sig gonna be in the next chapter? Hope so. Love the story and hope you update is asap! |
| bloody raptor chapter 10 . 8/11/2010 I wounder what will happen next |
| Gogglehead Neo chapter 10 . 8/10/2010 amazing chapter i loved the emotional tension cant wait for the next chapter NEO OUT! |
| bookwormally chapter 10 . 8/10/2010 Wow poor kids... I understand everyone's side in the argument though. Im glad Keira apologized to Jak. So they are going to split up well I hope everything works out. Update when you can! |
| HopelessRomantic183 chapter 10 . 8/9/2010 It was great to learn more about Daxter's past, but it was also a bit sad learning just how horrible it was. It's a shame that the three will have to split up, but I am also looking forward to seeing what crazy adventures Jak and Dax will end up going on from here on out! This was an awesome chapter! I will eagerly be awaiting more! |
| Fishyicon chapter 10 . 8/9/2010 Wow. This is such a great story. I'm sorry I didn't review it sooner, but I read the first 9 chapters before I had an account, before I knew you could submit anonymous reviews. I'm really stupid sometimes... The plot is excellent and the characters are perfectly in-character. I love the first chapter, just the description of your Haven city, the fall of Dead Town and the metal kids... definitely one of the best Jak and Daxter fics out there. I'm so glad you decided to continue it! I'll be awaiting the next chapter impatiently! |
