Well, what can you say to that kind of logic? How about, Too bad, so sad. I do hope when the Dark Moron goes down for good he takes all his suck in ups with him! In alot of fanfiction stories the old Dark fool tied all his followers to himself by their Dark Mark. It sucks their magic and life force out of them for Tommy boys personal use. This when he dies they did. I think that's quite the fittting end for them!

Shrieking, not shreaking...

I was questioning the quality of this story for about the first quarter of the story, but it definitely improved as it went along and I enjoyed it.

Well, now I see Wormtail escaped Azkaban...

Not finished with this chapter, but shows Wormtail with Voldemort when it was supposedly captured at the Dursleys and sent to Azkaban with animagus blocking or something.

I got to be honest with you, you have no aesthetic style. Seriously harry is 5’11 with a stocky build so he’s a well filled out guy no anything impressive though better then what most people do. But seriously spiked his hair I hope you just mean short and messy cause spiked stopped being in style years ago. A mustache on his ruggedly handsome face, got to say a mustache is the worst kind of facial hair. A goatee maybe stubble or a beard no I chose a mustache.

There is no reason why harry should be aware of what the prophecy says also the trend of ridiculously overpowered goblins is really getting old.

No one ever presumed that the bog lines would help them so fuck your. Neither Voldemort or Dumbledore ever tried to recruit their species cause they knew they goblins would tell them to fuck off.

damm, harry sure is blunt.
hey, girl I have never met before but only seen sometimes at school.
I know you don't know me and that you just lost your whole family. wanna learn sex magic rituals with me in France? hahaha
this is some seriously ridiculous story but I suppose that for those unintended crack moments its worth a read

Thank you for sharing. although would have preferred some use of the royal Phoenix in escaping the blow up. nicely written.

I’m dropping this now as I’ve lost interest. I’ve been tempted to just skim through and not properly read because you seem to put a lot of emphasis on parts of the story that have no weight... it’s just filler. The romance is forced and the antagonists are comical at best. I particularly dislike how you play off Dumbledore’s actions. From what I know, dementia would not result in the way he acted, so it’s just another weak excuse. He may not be evil, but he’s an arrogant, manipulative sociopath.

I’m confused. He’s got training in combat and all this other stuff, both he and Daphne should logically be graduates by now, but they inexplicably decide to return to Hogwarts and rather than doing what he’s best at, you have Harry healing. The past few chapters have been nothing but Harry being a hypocrite about rules, Harry stupidly revealing secrets that needn’t be revealed and Harry not going to help in the fights where his presence would be the most helpful. There’s also no good reason for Harry not to have properly shut Molly, Ron and Ginny down in that first encounter. Why did Sirius, Daphne and Fleur convince him otherwise? What was the worst that could result from that? It just seemed like a weak excuse to not nip that problem in the bud, so they could cause problems again and again. Lazy.

“Thinking all Slytherins are evil is prejudiced and bigoted, so I’m surprised you’re not in Slytherin seeing as you’re as prejudiced and bigoted as them.”

That’s essentially what Harry just said to Ron... how did you not notice the glaring hypocrisy?

nice cool

Fantastic wrap up