Reviews for On Her Own
Hatty101 chapter 8 . 12/5/2010
I LOVE UR STORY! x
thelover932 chapter 8 . 9/19/2010
wow that was so good hope tht you write more or at least more chapters
twilightloveexo chapter 5 . 8/30/2009
hmm im sorry i dont have any good song ideas ... if i hear anything ill tell you. but its a good story. haha please keep writing i like it. alot. :)
animal8 chapter 8 . 8/30/2009
Excellent! Loved this! Did Alice really cry fo Bella? Looking forward to reading what happens and how the other Cullens react now that Bella has decided to stay with them. Absolutely cannot wait. Please, please, update soon! ;)
stefxxkayy chapter 8 . 8/29/2009
its probably of no signoficance whatsoever, but i like the songs hello, by evanescence and ignorance, by paramore,

they probably wont fit in your story, but i like them.(:
switzerland333 chapter 8 . 8/29/2009
hey! i like ur story but itink it would b kool if tanya came back. a nice little twist!
OMGeorgie chapter 8 . 8/29/2009
LOL good story really liked it )
twilightloveexo chapter 7 . 8/28/2009
this is a really good story :) update son!
Raynelilwayne chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
Come on plz write the next chap son!
animal8 chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
Fantastic! Absloutely loved this chapter, especially the bit with the Cullens in the cafe. Nice bit of drama and action. I hope that Bella is OK. Looking forward to reading what happens next. Please, update soon! ;)
AliceJH chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
That was reeally awesome chapter!So, i guess the savior is Edward !I hope you're able to update soon!Good work!

Ira
mrsreardon2001 chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
great story. update soon please. As for the song. all i really know is rock a by baby and twibkle twinkle little star. i dont think those with help you.
xXTainted.InkXx chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
Oh. I just happened upon your story and I really like it! ]

It's very well written and I love how Bella doesn't give in right away, and stands up for her beliefs.

As for lyrics, I have to say, thinking about Bella standing up for her self it reminds me of Leave out all the rest by Linkin Park. The 'I can't be who you are' line. I love that song so much 3

Haha. I just thought of a great plot twist! [You do not have to use it or consider it, this is just for my amusement]

Let's say after the attack and everything Bella does give in to Alice and move in.[Perhaps some BellaxEdward?] BUT the world catches wind of this and it's in the news. Then some crazy fan [Tanya?] comes and threatens them and Bella. Bella being herself believes this is all her fault, she then runs away and no one can find her. Now a number of years later the Cullen family once again runs into a homless person sleeping in a park? Gasp!

Haha. If you actually did write a story with that plot you would be my hero!

Anyways there is my long review ] I hope you actually read it and liked it!

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P.S

Feel free to respond to me, just to talk if you like! D
deletemyaccount4378fn chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
Hey, I just started reading your story and I got to say, I don't normally read that many All Human ones, but yours is really good! I'm looking foward to the next chapter!

Um, a Song Idea could be 'This is Home' by Switchfoot (I think)

I'll try think of some others!
iambesoletmebeme chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
really good story love it!
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